This came to me as I was just gettin dressed... not too sure this is what Joseph has in mind with his "connection between nature and spirit", but seemed OK to me - until I realised the non-rhyming flaws: Dayumm!! K :)) xx
BUTCH
Tres Linhas Unrhymed and Unhinged
Dressed only in jeans
I walked round bare-chested -
What freedom being a bloke!
:))
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i see you haven't visited the beaches of Fire Island ;) seriously, men do have more freedom in publicy expressing their chests, at least in the modern world which is a statement of men's hangups, insecurities and uncontrollable urges ...
Bless you, Chanti... but you know what bugs me the most?? Not being able to take a pee au natural discreetly... Take last week, for example - my birthday spent roaming the wilds of Dorset coast and hills, only to find that whenever I needed to find a bush and basically strip off from the waist down, there was half of the Birdwatchers and Ramblers Association of Great Britain present to cause me to up-breeches and take off just as soon as poss... so much easier for the chaps to only have to turn their backs and get on with job in hand without as much as anyone batting an eyelid... Sooooooooooooooooo unfair. Simon even has pictures... euch!!
There is a lot more to this than meets the eye ;-)
This was one you had to get off your chest wasn't it?
Ok enough bad puns. lol
The truth is that men DO enjoy more freedom in so many respects but I still prefer being a gal. In spite of all of the indignities we suffer, we have experiences that they could never understand. I don't know why but I just thought of a weak joke I was told a long time ago. Little girl in bath with her brother, points to his willy and says 'Why don't I have one of those?' Mother's reply: 'With what you've got darlin', you can as many of those as you like when you grow up.' *grimace*
Oh, to let 'em swing free, unrestrained...sigh. LOL Freedom, indeed. Men have it, don't they? They can walk around bare-chested, no one says anything. A woman does that in public, she's arrested for indecent northern exposure! LOL Love the sassiness in this fun write; well done!
Excellent words even if they don't rhyme, Kate. You are so right about the freedom part, men don't know how good they have it, though I am very happy that all my repro organs are not hanging out there in harms way. I think most men would happily give up their bare-chested rights to have never experienced an accidental shot to the groin. ;)
Take care,
Sherry
Now that you have got something off your chest, take a trip to the Riviera and be in style. With Hollywood gals bearing so much cleavage, little is left to the imagination.
This is good work. Someohow, I can't beyond the visual, but I'm working on the literary quality here. "Freedom," is our most expansive word. I love it in any context... or out of.....
Stunning and this is one of those times I question all right where is her graphic to go along with this, anyway it is a good job and I can use imagination to see you bouncing around the house packing with the impish grin of yours in full bloom. Good stuff sweet Kate.
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Regis
Bloke don't have a pretty 'chest' as the gals :)
Susan
Birgit and Roger
This was one you had to get off your chest wasn't it?
Ok enough bad puns. lol
The truth is that men DO enjoy more freedom in so many respects but I still prefer being a gal. In spite of all of the indignities we suffer, we have experiences that they could never understand. I don't know why but I just thought of a weak joke I was told a long time ago. Little girl in bath with her brother, points to his willy and says 'Why don't I have one of those?' Mother's reply: 'With what you've got darlin', you can as many of those as you like when you grow up.' *grimace*
Keep smiling :-))
Chanti
Love Tinka
This is one guy who dozen't walk about bare chested...lols
I like your unorthodox style here...:)
Peter
Oh, to let 'em swing free, unrestrained...sigh. LOL Freedom, indeed. Men have it, don't they? They can walk around bare-chested, no one says anything. A woman does that in public, she's arrested for indecent northern exposure! LOL Love the sassiness in this fun write; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Take care,
Sherry
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Bill
Hugs,
Pops
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Love your work Kate..
You are amazing..
Vesna