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Birds On The Wire
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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... I read somewhere today that polar bears are always left-handed... I know I'm gullible, but is that true ?!! :)) Anyways, feelin definitely like a bear with a sore head at the moment and about as clumsy as grizzly with two left feet... Hence a write that goes with it... But hey... still smilin!! :)) LOL K xx


BIRDS ON THE WIRE


The pigeon swings on an overhead cable –
like a fatuous cleric, his overlarge body
puffed-up in stuffy vestments.

Craning his neck to study my movements,
his pitted eyes agog with “I say! I say!”
His dog collar is back to front, he’s unsure of his own
footing, but still he considers me unsound.

I point my cocked finger pistol and bang!
He was right.
I blow.

The dove carries no deadweight,
exercises no comparative judgement.
Her tones soothe and her soft-grey plumage
speaks of a purity spun through multitudes of washing.

Preening her wing she signs like a gloved hand;
deft fingers spelling out a message of grace.

Mute ambassador of a forgiving god –
not deaf but long-suffering and always on target.
I smile.


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 Reviews of "Birds On The Wire"
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on August 17, 2006
Loved this! Had a chuckle too. Oddly these are the same bird just different color. ;-) A dove's taken to resting on my lawn. Had to stop my cat from going after her a couple of times. Fantastic write, Kate. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
Awesome characterization of these two creatures, Kate...preachy pidgeon...I'd blast him with my finger as well and welcome the soft coo of the dove...God's messenger. What a knack you have for conveying a poignant message with a subtle sense of humor too...
Wishing you well , Kate.
Love, Taylor

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
Unsound? I don't think so! Purveyor of God's grace? Exactly!

Beautifully written, despite not feeling well, Kate. Hope that changes soon!

Prayers & Love to you, Rhonda

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
"Preening her wing she signs like a gloved hand;
deft fingers spelling out a message of grace."

Oh, Kate dear...what an absolutely delightful piece of work! I
especially enjoyed the vision of the Dove, as there are a lot of them by my house, and on the feeder, and they do indeed act that way.
Hugs to you from the States.

Reviewed on August 16, 2006
Glad to see you are still smiling and still writing excellent poetry!
Love and peace, B&R

Reviewed on August 16, 2006
Wish I was a polar bear, with all of this heat. I'm left handed...does that partially qualify? ANY WAY, Kate, this is sumptious writing at its most comforting best! Well done, hope you're feeling better soon. REAL soon.

(((((HUGS))))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on August 16, 2006
Excellent write, Kate; hope you are feeling better soon; you are in my prayers!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
perfect description...wonderful words...I'm sitting here, two days into a bad headache and this poem soothed me...like seeing an old friend, silly loveable bird!

Susan

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
And say. I'm a little dove and I like a little love..

LOL birds do give that. "Who coo are you coo?"
They're even cooing outside now. Nice one KOO KOO Kate..

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on August 16, 2006
This one has a toehold...talons grasp it!
"speaks of a purity spun through multitudes of washing" and I have to say that this line is very cathartic and ironed crisp with poetic starch and it wears well, and I think of flipping the bird southpaw! Very perceptive write, Kate...

Sage

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 15, 2006
Incredible descriptions Kate,your use of metaphor,make this poem a joy to read with its dynamic images!

It looks like you too are in a bit of a funk,you have my prayers
and thanks for yours!;-) ...Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 15, 2006
Very well written kate...with a such vivid imagery I could hear the bang!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2006
Your one description here (puffed up stuffy vestaments) gave me a great mental image of a cross stitch line of birds that have the funniest expressions yet look realistic-I really enjoyed this lighter side-be well-Michelle

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 15, 2006
birds of a feather
who aren't tethered
will get up and fly
into the winds of life

i'm proud of myself, i typed it with my left hand ;)

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 15, 2006
I see the wonder in your eyes and the humour in your smile, instead of the bird poop that people hate the doves and pigeons for you see their beauty and their wisdom. Sweet Kate your finger pistol so easily turns to a brush soft and gentle in your hands. Fee

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on August 15, 2006
The Dove's peaceful nature is one man could immulate...never an enemy and always at peace. Beautiful pen Kate.
Susan

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2006
I love the spiritual and instruction I found in this laced with humor :)
Wonderful work Kate!!!!!!

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on August 15, 2006
Just goes to show that you don't need to be in the right mood to produce poetry. Once again I was blown away (ahem...forgive the expression) by your use of figurative language. The imagery you create is always breathtaking. I especially loved the image of the dove preening 'she signs like a gloved hand' What an original and elegant way to put it. I also enjoyed the contrasts created between the 'puffed up', arrogance of the pigeon and the purity of the dove.
I smiled right along with you at the punch line.
Absolutely marvellous!
Chanti

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 15, 2006
Kate

There is a grave shortage of goodwill and humor in the world today..
We could do with that dove carrying the olive branch again..

Peter

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 15, 2006
I think I've felt the droppings of this write land on my forehead. Ha Ha

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2006
Precious!!!

Peace & Love, Dove

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on August 15, 2006
Ah! a smoking gun of a message here Mizz MP "I say!" "I say!" would be nice if her wings could encompass the world at the moment.

Paul;-)


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