The painter smiled his gap-tooth grin outside the kitchen window. “So are they your set of drums then?” He jerked his head in the direction of the music room and jiggled brushes in both hands to demonstrate. “You bet”, I replied, flicking my wrists in copycat fashion. “I’ve just reached Grade 6.” I don’t know why I lied – perhaps the devil made me do it. But all the rest of the day, the steady fingertip and flat-palm beat of congas laced its way through the looping spools of my veins, making me slope, shuffle or twitch. Even driving to the gym, my feet and hands engaged a terrific percussion solo, involving the entire width of the car and a rhythmic, pulsating head-banging. Later it was a Santana CD that was unconsciously picked and dragged from the back of the pile, as I sambad my way through cooking supper with cocktail-shaking aplomb. It’s strange how the body seems to know what it needs: the immune system responds well to sound. Tonight my bed will be thick with the taste of Angostura bitters, hot rum and the viscosity of fiery red blood pounding my soul. And tomorrow I’ll be better: it will be a ballet of strings.
Ooooh Kate, your in dire straits here girl...
They came to mind when I read this, prolly cause of the diversity of Knofflers music genius.
Kewl Write Kate
Ch'erie
No matter how poorly you may feel, your writing seems unaffected. You are an incredible person with an amazing outlook on life. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece and smiled throughout. Do whatever it takes to help that immune system and get better soon dear Kate. You are a blessing to all at the den.
love Chanti
Like the cut-out top of a Jack-O-Lantern, somedays music just fits. Use the word drumsticks an' they'll either broil you or beat you, either way, the Angostura bitters and hot rum'll go with, in harmony with the Cosmic mind of Santana's Black Magic Woman, tomorrow's graceful mood-producing musical effect. Stay on your ballet tippy-toes, Kate!
my my Kate, sakes alive you be doin the shuck n' jive methinks we are truckin on down the same path;-)sure hope those ballet slippers fit you in the morning!I'm sending some Bolshoi Brandy to go with your bitters;-)...along with healing vibes...;-) Eileen
jive on! my first thought, honestly, was what kind of medicine is she on? then I got into the beat and, darn it, if your rhythmic concoction didn't get me tappin' my tired feet. enjoyed this fully. drumroll to Kate! best, Dawn
A little rythmtic teenage right of passage is what we have here and Eileen I can see you just juve'n.
Reminded me of my days and the Beachboys for me...they did it since I spent all my spare time doing the shag at Tybee Island.
Thanks for the memories.
Love...feel'n better?
Susan
Oh sweet Kate, from the rythem of the word to the rythem of the drums and all points in between, you have the beat. You know though I sort of fanazized about you playing the Nelson drum and my the bag pipes dressed in Kilts of our clans somewhere in the highlands. Whoo think I just felt a weee draft up under me kilt.
For off beam, you light up the screen with this one. Of course, here in the South we used to call it juke-in...and you are absolutely right, music is a healer and it just makes me want to move from tomorrow's "ballet of strings" to the next day's bootie shakin...you got it goin' on Kate.
Love,
Taylor
A day... and a night... like that has a name; a Shaker Taker Time. You begin the day shaking it all out, as you so openly confessed about unmastered drums. Next, try doing that never never tried successfully, as with music and your mind/body need to flow with it. The taker part is the real play time - in whatever way convenient and tasty, for that's how to take the prize and be congratulated the next monning on winning. Please see me after calss if this is not clear.
You write it well. and I'm on your side ! ! !
- Bill
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 17, 2006
Love the descriptions and how you pull your reader in with the emotions that you have stirred up with your words.
from a painter, to grade 6, to congas, to veins, to head-banging, to a cockyail-shaking aplomb, to immune system, to Angostura bitters and a ballet of strings ... boy Kate, you covered all the bases in this one ...
A splash of Angostura bitters in a cocktail glass about half full with good bourbon . . . Look out . . . gotta love it. Man, oh man, it has been YEARS since I have had that wonderful taste in my mouth. Sorry, but your poem/prose fell apart on me as soon as I saw the name Angostura bitters.
The Wholly Book of Genesis is a humorous satire on the first book of the Old Testament where the Story of Creation, the building of Noah's Ark, Sodom and Gomorrah and the families of Abraham, Isaac and Jacob are thoroughly spoofed and broadsided.
Aberjhani
They came to mind when I read this, prolly cause of the diversity of Knofflers music genius.
Kewl Write Kate
Ch'erie
Love&Prayers, Rhonda
Love and Peace, B&R
love Chanti
Excellent work Kate!!
love Tinka
In fraternity and wellness ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *prayers, too*
(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
A little bit of jive talking is good for the heart and soul...
I could envision and hear Santana playng Samba Pa Ti in the background...
Love
Peter
Bit of the Walter Mitties huh, you should be compfy enough in yer own skin..
A day in the life prosotry.. Keep jivin juke box Kate..
Sage
Regis
Reminded me of my days and the Beachboys for me...they did it since I spent all my spare time doing the shag at Tybee Island.
Thanks for the memories.
Love...feel'n better?
Susan
Hugs,
Pops
Love,
Taylor
You write it well. and I'm on your side ! ! !
- Bill
Love & Healing, Dove