Came in a flash whilst reading the voice of this year's T S Eliot shortlisted poet, Penelope Shuttle... to be regretted, perhaps, at leisure! :)) K xx
FALLEN
I’ve fallen
feet first,
head over heels
out of luck,
out of bed,
into love,
across the tracks.
Fallen from grace,
fallen foul;
fallen out of favour
and into faith.
Fallen into a trap,
a game, a steady slow march,
a flame;
under a spell,
into the fire –
whatever fallen is,
I have fallen for it.
And fallen, as Alice will tell you,
is a life-changing experience
not entrusted to the wise
nor surrendered to the perpetually
upwardly mobile.
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Reviews of "FALLEN"
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2007
The cleverly executed mind image of Alice in Wonderland is the icing on this smoothly flowing write. You are SO good, milady. SO good!
I am always inspired by the genuiness of your emotional writes.
Hugs, Anna M.
oh I do love this and you know Kate
I'm a huge follower of TS Eliot
but yes truly a regret of his and
I have to disagree strongly... it's very
good me thinks
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2007
yup..been there DONE that..darn..STILL doing it..
OH well..best get myself up and going..
I love this ..am saving it..thankyou Kate.
Hope all is well with you and yours...
Blessings,
Okay, Love... it's called, "relaxing and enjoying it... whatever "it" happens to be. Isn't it delightful to fall for those things that were putoffs? You've pplaced the process into new perspectives, and I congratulate you... verbesmith, that you are!
- Bill
i do like this change of style ... flows effortlessly ... strange, how one can fall while moving upward ... only in faith ourselves will maintain our balance ...
I love this Kate and I can certainly relate it to my life. I do many things by the fallen method, it sometimes is just the kick in the pants that I need. We all fall into things, I suppose, but it is how we respond once we have that speaks of our character and flexibility. Very nice offering, simply stated and straight forward. Gonna save this one.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Debra Harmes-Kurth (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
I think I like it too, I've read through it a couple of times here. the poem moves so quickly while reading it, that it takes more than one read to catch everything in it.
debra
Hey pretty good, I think I have fallen for this altered format and difiance from your normal writes. Wonderful images and love the reference to Alice, you are so true, she was a great example of falling. Well done Sweet Kate.
Hugs,
Pop
A humorous look at the world and life through my eyes.
Follow the author and his wife, as they travel the world …. several times over.
Laugh at their funny stories, self-inflicted crazy events, strange observations, wacky zoo facts and snippets
I am always inspired by the genuiness of your emotional writes.
Hugs, Anna M.
I'm a huge follower of TS Eliot
but yes truly a regret of his and
I have to disagree strongly... it's very
good me thinks
OH well..best get myself up and going..
I love this ..am saving it..thankyou Kate.
Hope all is well with you and yours...
Blessings,
Vsna:)
Regis (Reg)
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Love,
CJ
Love Tinka
Carmen
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Brett
- Bill
"whatever fallen is,
I have fallen for it."
That reminds me of Chanti and the "Miracle Mitt(s)" she ordered...LOL
Edwin
Warmly, WArrior Sheeeooxx
Take care,
Sherry
debra
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Susan
Hugs,
Pop