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FALLEN
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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Came in a flash whilst reading the voice of this year's T S Eliot shortlisted poet, Penelope Shuttle... to be regretted, perhaps, at leisure! :)) K xx


FALLEN


I’ve fallen

feet first,
head over heels
out of luck,
out of bed,

into love,
across the tracks.

Fallen from grace,
fallen foul;

fallen out of favour
and into faith.

Fallen into a trap,
a game, a steady slow march,
a flame;

under a spell,
into the fire –

whatever fallen is,
I have fallen for it.

And fallen, as Alice will tell you,
is a life-changing experience
not entrusted to the wise
nor surrendered to the perpetually

upwardly mobile.



  

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 Reviews of "FALLEN"
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2007
The cleverly executed mind image of Alice in Wonderland is the icing on this smoothly flowing write. You are SO good, milady. SO good!
I am always inspired by the genuiness of your emotional writes.
Hugs, Anna M.

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on January 26, 2007
I like the doublespeak in this poem. It is like the Alice in Wonderland story itself. Somehow it leaves a question of which way is up. Great poem.

Reviewed on January 26, 2007
You grabbed me from the beginning to the end. Thanks.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on January 26, 2007
oh I do love this and you know Kate
I'm a huge follower of TS Eliot
but yes truly a regret of his and
I have to disagree strongly... it's very
good me thinks

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2007
yup..been there DONE that..darn..STILL doing it..
OH well..best get myself up and going..
I love this ..am saving it..thankyou Kate.
Hope all is well with you and yours...
Blessings,

Vsna:)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 24, 2007
Me too. And I'm hurting for being a fool. Love you lots,

Regis (Reg)

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on January 24, 2007
To fall is human ... to get back up is divine. The form itself makes one feel as if they were falling. Good work, as always, Kate!

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on January 24, 2007
oh yeah....

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2007
amazing write! God Bless, Holly

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on January 23, 2007
This is brilliant, Kate -- an excellent poem about falling in love! I enjoyed this one start to finish. Well done.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on January 23, 2007
sometimes few words say so much

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 23, 2007
Enjoyed the read Kate!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on January 22, 2007
Great streem of thought piece of work.

Carmen

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2007
Great flow in this poem. Victor

Reviewed on January 22, 2007
I'm glad I fell into this poem, Kate. :) A delight--

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Brett Moore
Reviewed on January 22, 2007
What a great poem, Kate. There are so many ways to fall.

Brett

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on January 22, 2007
Okay, Love... it's called, "relaxing and enjoying it... whatever "it" happens to be. Isn't it delightful to fall for those things that were putoffs? You've pplaced the process into new perspectives, and I congratulate you... verbesmith, that you are!
- Bill

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
i do like this change of style ... flows effortlessly ... strange, how one can fall while moving upward ... only in faith ourselves will maintain our balance ...

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Love it...Hugsssssssssssss

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Fun write...Help I've fallen and I can't get up :)!!
"whatever fallen is,

I have fallen for it."

That reminds me of Chanti and the "Miracle Mitt(s)" she ordered...LOL



Edwin

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
i love this pretty creative!

Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Love this Kate!

Warmly, WArrior Sheeeooxx

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
I love this Kate and I can certainly relate it to my life. I do many things by the fallen method, it sometimes is just the kick in the pants that I need. We all fall into things, I suppose, but it is how we respond once we have that speaks of our character and flexibility. Very nice offering, simply stated and straight forward. Gonna save this one.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Debra Harmes-Kurth (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
I think I like it too, I've read through it a couple of times here. the poem moves so quickly while reading it, that it takes more than one read to catch everything in it.
debra

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Enjoyed....this is a bit of different write...falling sometines is a life changing experience.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
I love it!

Susan

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Hey pretty good, I think I have fallen for this altered format and difiance from your normal writes. Wonderful images and love the reference to Alice, you are so true, she was a great example of falling. Well done Sweet Kate.
Hugs,
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