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Cartwheel
by Kate Burnside → (All Poetry by Kate Burnside)
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CARTWHEEL


First there was Peter Benson’s
face (freckled like a sparrow’s egg)
peering through the hedge;

then my absurd attempt to sky-walk:
foot-foot-hand-hand,
the sudden swoop of sun,
a catapult of knobbly knees,
soft thump on new-mown grass
(and Peter still the right way up,
wreathed in greenery and grinning).

Past avenues of towering shelves,
gravitas of books and the librarian’s
plumb-line silence, the gusset of my
ribbed wool tights was sunk mid-thigh
after all my dizzy turns;

grasping table-corners to steady me,
I dropped into an empty chair
directly opposite Peter,
gap-toothed amid old hardbacks
teetering awkwardly sky-high.

He slipped me some gum.
Both weightless and freewheeling,
there was no nun to tell us not to.

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Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2009
My dear Kate, I do believe you must've written this just for me - the knobbly knees, the sinking gusset of wool tights, swoops of sun and freckle-faced boys! It's as if you've just viewed an old reel-to-reel of my elementary days and used your word magic to enhance the images. I do believe I can smell fresh crayons and paste.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on October 11, 2009
This is real and vivid, Kate. I really enjoyed your attention to detail in this poem. Her tights, the awkward stage, the friendship... Well done!
Sheila

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on October 9, 2009
Cute and innocent write Kate...no matter in which subject you write you write with such a grace and dignity...no doubt, AD is proud to have you around...and we poets are lucky to learn from you...keep them coming Kate...love n luck...BHUWAN!!

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on October 8, 2009
foot-foot-hand-hand-thump. My kind of cartwheel, until after month's of practice, I could finally do a handstand on a skateboard. Thanks for the memory jog. Patrick

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on October 8, 2009
Sweet! You gotta love a poem like this.

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on October 8, 2009
Kate - Your words convey the shared exuberance and innocence of the young. Loved these lines:

the sudden swoop of sun,
a catapult of knobbly knees,
soft thump on new-mown grass
(and Peter still the right way up,
wreathed in greenery and grinning).

- David

Reviewed on October 8, 2009
Fun stuff, Kate.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 8, 2009
Little children, acceptance, innocence, and puppy love, you said it all.

Georg


Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
Kate, I'm sitting here with a grin on my face. I love this....it's sweet, nostalgic, filled with innocence.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
i love the sweet innocence of this!

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
Such a playful innocents to this Kate,,makes one want to get up and do a cartwheel,,,smiles ps My Mom told me about those nuns...lol
Love,Christine

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
captures an innocent moment in your youth when life was "weightless and freewheeling" and uninhibited by the confines of the world, short-lived as it may be .... witty & droll ... fab imagery ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
What images you have made me recall so vividly! You have such a gift for detail Kate,and bringing things to life! Kudo's!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
Wonderful nostalgia. Youth wasn't wasted on youth here. Liz

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 7, 2009

Oh for that feeling of out of control spin where the rest of the world doesn't matter for then, the timeless independence of the moment..."no nun to tell us not to"...you fire my recalls, too, and I tumble headlong...and what an experience!
Thank you, thank you, Kate, for making a very heavy sultry morning so much lighter and brighter.

John


Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
Ah sweet Kate, I read this and I felt envious of young Peter, to have known the vivacious and irristable "little" Katie of those days would have been a joy indeed. So deprived of that pleasure at least you allowed me the next best thing...a quick flashback through your memories into your childhood and I loved what I saw. Soooo cute and pee on the nuns...who needs em. LOL
hugs
Pops

Reviewed on October 7, 2009
I love this poem! Childhood revisited, what a carefree wonderful time it was. Well done Kate.

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
OH WHAT FUN!! DELICIOUS MOMENTS OF HAPPINESS!...AND HOW WELL YOU DESCRIBE IT KATE. ENJOYED IMMENSELY AND THANKS FOR SHARING.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
A sweet sharing, Kate. It reminds me of recess at Catholic school and the nuns who would get upset with me for chasing the girls. Thank you. Love and best wishes,


Regis

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
I love the light heartedness in this poem. You write with such diverseness that I just love all of your work. I look forward to the adventure of your style and form, even if it is a cartwheel experience. Wonderful poetry, Kate..
Much peace, love, and light my friend,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
Hah! This reads almost like a hard-boiled detective situation, something I am getting ready to post as soon as I finish this. This is a bit different for you, and I like the casual attitude you show here.

Reviewed on October 7, 2009
Kate,

You capture the magic, the wonder of childhood freedom and derring-do. 'I will if you will.' Those days long passed - my feet planted firmly on ground, but my head is still in the clouds (as you very well know). What say we ride the back of an elephant or look! - there's a Pteradactyl wanting to take us for a spin. =] Well done, my friend, I love the joie de vivre in these spirited/dizzying lines!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
Cute as a button in this look back poem.

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
I love this freewheeling romp into childhood remembrances! It is bubbly and charming and reminds me of how much my children love to do cartwheels and sommersaults... Watching them is enough to make me dizzy though! :~)

Cryssa


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