First there was Peter Benson’s
face (freckled like a sparrow’s egg)
peering through the hedge;
then my absurd attempt to sky-walk:
foot-foot-hand-hand,
the sudden swoop of sun,
a catapult of knobbly knees,
soft thump on new-mown grass
(and Peter still the right way up,
wreathed in greenery and grinning).
Past avenues of towering shelves,
gravitas of books and the librarian’s
plumb-line silence, the gusset of my
ribbed wool tights was sunk mid-thigh
after all my dizzy turns;
grasping table-corners to steady me,
I dropped into an empty chair
directly opposite Peter,
gap-toothed amid old hardbacks
teetering awkwardly sky-high.
He slipped me some gum.
Both weightless and freewheeling,
there was no nun to tell us not to.
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Reviews of "Cartwheel"
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on October 11, 2009
My dear Kate, I do believe you must've written this just for me - the knobbly knees, the sinking gusset of wool tights, swoops of sun and freckle-faced boys! It's as if you've just viewed an old reel-to-reel of my elementary days and used your word magic to enhance the images. I do believe I can smell fresh crayons and paste.
This is real and vivid, Kate. I really enjoyed your attention to detail in this poem. Her tights, the awkward stage, the friendship... Well done!
Sheila
Cute and innocent write Kate...no matter in which subject you write you write with such a grace and dignity...no doubt, AD is proud to have you around...and we poets are lucky to learn from you...keep them coming Kate...love n luck...BHUWAN!!
foot-foot-hand-hand-thump. My kind of cartwheel, until after month's of practice, I could finally do a handstand on a skateboard. Thanks for the memory jog. Patrick
Kate - Your words convey the shared exuberance and innocence of the young. Loved these lines:
the sudden swoop of sun,
a catapult of knobbly knees,
soft thump on new-mown grass
(and Peter still the right way up,
wreathed in greenery and grinning).
captures an innocent moment in your youth when life was "weightless and freewheeling" and uninhibited by the confines of the world, short-lived as it may be .... witty & droll ... fab imagery ...
Oh for that feeling of out of control spin where the rest of the world doesn't matter for then, the timeless independence of the moment..."no nun to tell us not to"...you fire my recalls, too, and I tumble headlong...and what an experience!
Thank you, thank you, Kate, for making a very heavy sultry morning so much lighter and brighter.
Ah sweet Kate, I read this and I felt envious of young Peter, to have known the vivacious and irristable "little" Katie of those days would have been a joy indeed. So deprived of that pleasure at least you allowed me the next best thing...a quick flashback through your memories into your childhood and I loved what I saw. Soooo cute and pee on the nuns...who needs em. LOL
hugs
Pops
A sweet sharing, Kate. It reminds me of recess at Catholic school and the nuns who would get upset with me for chasing the girls. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
I love the light heartedness in this poem. You write with such diverseness that I just love all of your work. I look forward to the adventure of your style and form, even if it is a cartwheel experience. Wonderful poetry, Kate..
Much peace, love, and light my friend,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2009
Hah! This reads almost like a hard-boiled detective situation, something I am getting ready to post as soon as I finish this. This is a bit different for you, and I like the casual attitude you show here.
You capture the magic, the wonder of childhood freedom and derring-do. 'I will if you will.' Those days long passed - my feet planted firmly on ground, but my head is still in the clouds (as you very well know). What say we ride the back of an elephant or look! - there's a Pteradactyl wanting to take us for a spin. =] Well done, my friend, I love the joie de vivre in these spirited/dizzying lines!
I love this freewheeling romp into childhood remembrances! It is bubbly and charming and reminds me of how much my children love to do cartwheels and sommersaults... Watching them is enough to make me dizzy though! :~)
Homer's Ill Iliad & Odd Sea Odyssey (420 pages) is an adult satire/parody rewrite of the classic stories of the 10 year Trojan War and of the 10 year adventure of Odysseus trying to return home to his native Ithaca.
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Sheila
the sudden swoop of sun,
a catapult of knobbly knees,
soft thump on new-mown grass
(and Peter still the right way up,
wreathed in greenery and grinning).
- David
Georg
Love,Christine
Oh for that feeling of out of control spin where the rest of the world doesn't matter for then, the timeless independence of the moment..."no nun to tell us not to"...you fire my recalls, too, and I tumble headlong...and what an experience!
Thank you, thank you, Kate, for making a very heavy sultry morning so much lighter and brighter.
John
hugs
Pops
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Regis
Much peace, love, and light my friend,
Amber "V"
You capture the magic, the wonder of childhood freedom and derring-do. 'I will if you will.' Those days long passed - my feet planted firmly on ground, but my head is still in the clouds (as you very well know). What say we ride the back of an elephant or look! - there's a Pteradactyl wanting to take us for a spin. =] Well done, my friend, I love the joie de vivre in these spirited/dizzying lines!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Cryssa