Yolanda considers... (poem) by Kate Burnside on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 16, 2011

The weight of your words are amazing.

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on October 11, 2011

...OUCH...! THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed on October 11, 2011

Kate my dear one, you have penned quite a poem...I agree with Jude, it leaves me speechless. A very fine well oiled poem filled with suggestive mind boggling thoughts leading to the last stanza that totally sums up what you were thinking....

Well done, my sweet friend,
Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on October 9, 2011

Kate, I'm rapt with your humor that sets new bounds for resourcefulness --nothing testy going on here! -- "Spandex Innuendo" is so..so perfect -- you've elasticized the human psyche to expand beyond the joy "no-no-nos denial" -- where have you been hiding this marvelous humor? -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on October 9, 2011

Unique perspective, Kate, and I adore your word choices here. Playful.
Sheila

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on October 9, 2011

Everyone else has said it before me: that last stanza is marvelous, with its folds, layers, sensuous reality! The whole piece is a beautiful invitation to indulge and keep smiling. I read this one with great pleasure!

Axilea

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 8, 2011

a truly profound definition of desire ... the metaphor has floored me ...

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on October 8, 2011

Goodness, Kate and John what exquisitely ingenius repartee!
Conversations between two masters ~
I am a mere and humble voyeur :)
Love,
Christine

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on October 7, 2011

Ooooooo... Yolanda likes it when you get straight to the point, John! I reckon that's a definite... Yo!!!!!!! :)))))))) xxxxx

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on October 7, 2011

Dear Yolanda,
Is that a yes or a no?

Thank you, Great Kate, for the rich compliment
and for the fabulous poem you've just shared with us.
Glad to give you a 'nudge' (wink, wink) anytime
especially if it produces work of this quality..
nothing circumcised i mean circumscribed about that
final stanza!

John

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on October 6, 2011

That last verse is so awesome that it could stand on the page alone as a masterpiece.;
'Desire�s a skin that is scrotally seized and
no tightly-tied tongue can truss or conceal
its loose-hanging folds of excess.'

WOW...I WISH I'D WRITTEN THAT!
Best wishes to you and yours
from
Kay

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on October 6, 2011

now, now, kate! aren't you being just a tad uncharitable to
our well-seasoned teacher (!): desire??? "loose-hanging folds
of excess"--i love it! ;-)
witty and wonderful, dear poetess,
wishing you peace & blessings always,
carolyn

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on October 6, 2011

Kate, Quite ingenious...

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on October 6, 2011

omg, your word creativity never fails to amaze me

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 6, 2011

Amazing use of word play and imaginative poetic thought. As always you amaze and delight your readers.
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