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H.G. Potter, iDavid Clure, iMaryAngela Nangini PhD, iBob mitchley #shock stories, iJohn DeDakis, iRochelle Brandon, iTrennis Killian, iOdin odin@aflx.com, iTeresa Walker, iDean Cambourakis, i
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Light hearted limerick |
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There was a man from France
Who seemed in a trance
When jolted awake
Began a rhythmic shake
And then merrily dance
When he finally did stop
His dance- clippity -clop
All applauded the dance
Of this man from France
Shaking bottom to top
The lesson here to learn
Is not very stern
A man in trance in France
Unless you want to see a dance
The urge to wake him spurn
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Reviews of "The man from France (with apologies)"
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It's quite good except the last stanza, in order to finish the story is a bit awkward.
Ron