Reaction To You (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on August 10, 2004

Raging inferno of encircling flame
Licking around my shimmering form

..Oh what glorious lines..exceptional in their ageless beauty and eternal truth!!!

Vesna :)

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga

Reviewed on July 21, 2004

Dear Peter,

This is absolutely filled with passion.
What a superb wirte here, great work
Peter and Amira.

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2004

Peter, seamless poetry of togetherness and I appreciated the closing two lines on this terrific collaboration. Excellent work.

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

"Reaction To You"... A profound composition on love and togetherness.
A true masterpiece.

May You two keep writing, and sharing Your emotions through your art.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

a wonderful collaboration ... deeply moving and marvelously merging ...

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

What a super collaboration - touches the soul in a powerful and dramatic way that leaves the reader in awe! Beautiful, Peter and Amira!

Robert

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

Love is nice, ain't it?

Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

Well... I think I need to get me some collaboration here as this is nice write. loved about how touching and making love does all you say cause for sure it does.
Nice work you two have done
Tommy

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

Awesome write from you both!!
I loved this!!

~Linda

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

Great collaboration. Very passionate piece of poetry expressed in these verses. Thank you for sharing this, Peter. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

What a lovely and romantic collaboration, this was very beautiful,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

Wonderful write U 2!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

Another masterpiece Peter - especially verses 3 and 4, written by you!
Do me a favour and send some people over to my site - I love receiving reviews!
Love

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

Very romantic and well written.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

nice collab, you two! you two make an unbeatable combination! well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

Excellent input from the both of you. Totally seamless in its delivery. Well done and passionate.
Allen

Reviewed by Carma Stewart (Reader)

Reviewed on July 20, 2004

Beautiful in the way that Solomon's Song is beautiful. :)