This is great. I especially like the 3rd stanza. There is something about the "mirror image" having a metamorphosis in conjunction with the experience of the speaker… love it!
Peter, I liked how you built this from deep within leading to the very pinnacle of pleasure achieved at the sacred moment when two become one. Excellent work, Poet.
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very intense and lovely
the whole write......from beginning to end
pure bliss
paz
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Great line, "Woven seams of trust" - just the way trust should be ... fantastic verse here - stunning, absolutely stunning!!
Best wishes,
Robert
And metamorphose with me
..Oh what an invitation!
Vesna :)
Amy
Sandie May Angel
the words together, very creative!!
like a collage
Superb how you describe with sensual and exquisite words the wonder of love and romance.
Excellent.
Lisa
Just love it!!
Lov eTinka
This is a splendid poem Peter!
Woven poetry, absolute magic.
hugs and love
lga