By the Light of the Magical Moon (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 12, 2006

Such a lovely tribute to the sanctity of marriage, Peter.

Janet

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on August 12, 2004

Sworn obligations of love's eternal flame
Where self sacrifice and saintly patience
Tied a sacred knot

Indeed.....sigh

excellence in every letter every word..

Vesna :)

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on August 4, 2004

A resoundingly triumphant piece, Peter - excellent!

Robert

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 4, 2004

Awesomely uplifting write, Peter. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on August 4, 2004

a great poem.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on August 3, 2004

Peter, this write holds me awestruck. There is such beauty in the word usage. I felt as if I too were by the light of this moon.
Allen

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed

Reviewed on August 3, 2004

Truly a well written magical fairy tale. Hope for those still seeking happily-ever-daily who jump start to avoid the emotional rush of petty blame because, hey, all of us need space to breathe when the walls squeeze the frustration to the point of self destruction.

Glad to read and save this positive message Peter. Thank you.
cynth'ya

Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 3, 2004

Peter, this is a magical piece.

Amy

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 3, 2004

You always get in depth to the core of the matter Peter!
I agree with Jude,the joy of love!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 3, 2004

you've marvelously portrayed the magic of love ...

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 3, 2004

Beautiful poetry. You have crafted a wonderful portrait of love and commitment.