Sojourn On Mars Part 1 (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by rite

Reviewed on February 3, 2006

We are currently between worlds; the age of Capricorn has ended and the age of Aquarius is on its way. The decadent violence of the previous age has not ended yet. I may not be there in the flesh, but I cannot wait for the age of soothing promises to begin, for mankind's fatal ignorance to finally and conclusively end. Thank you for creating and sharing. Take care,

RAge

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on January 30, 2006

Powerful visuals and message in this series Thank you Peter for sharing this poem.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 29, 2006

extrememly imaginative and well written ...

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on January 28, 2006

Those who are True Leaders will not abandon this earth for no redemption will be found elsewhere.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on January 28, 2006

Very good! Excellent commentary on our society,
but somehow I don't think man can destroy this
earth but unfortunately I could be wrong. Scary!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 28, 2006

What a great offering...thanks!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on January 27, 2006

Oh my, never thought of this, from such a clever dimension..
Leaves one lamenting...

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on January 27, 2006

like this journey to the red planet, Peter. will be back for part 2. Dawn

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 27, 2006

A most compelling and thought-provoking creation, Peter. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on January 27, 2006

"Swirling winds whip menacingly across the ancient desert" reminds me so much of the Harmattan wind, and I envision the Indian women riding in a padded box on top of a camel to shelter them from the harsh wind.

"Evolution is my new Watchword" triggers a Darwin metaphor for me, that being Survival of the Fittest.

There are so many intelligent and inspiring lines in this and I am anxious for Part Two. Good write, Peter. Takes us on a hologram mind journey.

Sage

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 27, 2006

Insightful look into what was, what could have been, and what is.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 27, 2006

Peter this is fascinating. so beautifully written I can't wait for the next part! I agree with EdK.;-) Lead on!

Eileen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 27, 2006

excellent write, peter; so very well done! bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 27, 2006

A very somber, but very captivating write, Peter.

And I know you can't hold back Armageddon
Because its written in the blood of the Mar... tyrs

And those two lines are truly thought provoking. I often wonder if we could stop earth's destruction, even if we all truly wanted to - or if it's already too late.

But if anyone does make it to another world, you'd be a good choice to lead them, Peter.