The Labyrinth (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 11, 2006

Very good read and all so true - There are only two paths in life - The narror and the wide - The narror leads to eternal life and the wide to eternal death

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on February 9, 2006

Do I know the feeling!! Thanks for posting this creative and
thought-provoking write. Were I not caught in a maze of my own,
I would probably have some advice. So many times I have wondered,
What would have happened if I had turned left instead of right?
Taken a detour, or not? Guess everyone does. Good show!! 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on February 9, 2006

I Think Simple Word For It All Is You Have a Conscience,i.e. Millions Do Not_There Is Simply Right & There Is Wrong...

Unique Diffeernt Done Good Write...

TRASK

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on February 9, 2006

To insure one against crushing defeat and black despair, step out of ego's limelight and into the golden light of the labyrinth where there is only one way in and one way out. It takes patience and many tries to find one's way. One can do this by connecting unselfishly with others in an unfailing spiritual power source. Great mind-adjuster, Peter!

Sage

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 9, 2006

Peter I can always count on you for guidance! Besides darn good poetry,and great graphics. Love that "cut your coat to suit your cloth!";-) Great write!

Eileen

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2006

Inspriation and guidance this is so well written peter we often get caught up in the voices of the world but it is that still small voice that leads us wisely wonderful creativity and message. thank you for the lift.
Love,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2006

YES!!!! YOU , Peter, have helped me NOW, tonight..this very evening..thankyou!!

Superb write , one many will appreciate!

Vesna:)

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on February 9, 2006

Ego didn't do Job, a lot of good. Look what happened when he gave it up! Thanks for this reminder, Pete.

Carmen :-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 9, 2006

Thanks Peter for Sharing!!

Wel written!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on February 9, 2006

a unique and inspiring write, enjoyed.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 9, 2006

So jump off the bandwagon
Quit the roundabout of ego
And remember just who you are

We should all thank God for Guardian Angels, Peter, and we should all listen when they whisper in our ears.