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Like A Bird On A Wire ----- Three Liner
by Peter Paton → (All Poetry by Peter Paton)
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Like a bird on the wire,
Like a drunk in a midnight choir
I have tried in my way to be free.
Like a worm on a hook,
Like a knight from some old fashioned book
I have saved all my ribbons for thee.
If i, if I have been unkind,
I hope that you can just let it go by.
If i, if I have been untrue
I hope you know it was never to you.


Like a baby, stillborn,
Like a beast with his horn
I have torn everyone who reached out for me.
But I swear by this song
And by all that I have done wrong
I will make it all up to thee.
I saw a beggar leaning on his wooden crutch,
He said to me, you must not ask for so much.
And a pretty woman leaning in her darkened door,
She cried to me, hey, why not ask for more?

Oh like a bird on the wire,
Like a drunk in a midnight choir


I have tried in my way to be free

                                                             Leornard Cohen

 

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Your health is your wealth

the hand writes by itself

and nature operates by stealth
 

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 Reviews of "Like A Bird On A Wire ----- Three Liner"
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
Peter you are such a brilliant man! Your poetry is on a higher level than most, as is your knowledge! Your faith has made you an inspired man and I feel grateful to have you as a poet friend! Thank you for all your uplifting comments and prayers!

Love and peace,
Eileen

Reviewed by Huda Orfali
Reviewed on May 11, 2006
So true,:(
Loved this write, peter, well done
love and peace

Reviewed on May 10, 2006
Peter,

Gorgeous, profoundly moving write; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on May 9, 2006
A double treat for me, Peter as I absolutly LOVE Leonard Cohen and you have done an excellent job with the Tres Linhas format also. I smile everytime I see some poet recognize Mr. Cohen for I believe he is one of the great poets of our time as well as one heck of a musician and song writer. I think I must go listen to "Sisters of Mercy" and "Famous Blue Raincoat" now....TaTa!

Take care,

Sherry

Reviewed on May 9, 2006
This is an amazing write Peter
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on May 9, 2006
This wisdom is a book of life.
Your wisdom is precious to me Peter because you respect our world and you love with a true heart.
Thank you!
Love and harmony.
Susan

Reviewed by A. Santo (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2006
Yes nature does and you have written three lines worth a thousand words. Good day to you dear friend. :)

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2006
Wonderful lines Peter. Thank you..

Blessings, Dove

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on May 9, 2006
life has its way...of sneaking up on us all. beware the hand...that betrays the soul! Love you, dear Peter ~ rhonda

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 9, 2006
yippo...well done!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2006
Dynamite three lines!

Reviewed on May 9, 2006
This was lovely!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 9, 2006
Lady Kate always has such wonderful comments that I can only say amen to.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 9, 2006
Oooo... such truisms here, Peter, that are subtley concealed within your three lines in a mysterious way... makes me think of a conjuring trick, though I don't know why. Either that or a parable, pointing up true worth versus false perception. Cunning... but very beautiful, somehow.... like most of nature itself! Fascinated by your juxtaposition of chosen ideas... and must be a bit brain dead as to how they do or do not fit together... Aahh!! Therein lies the sleight of hand, perhaps??!! Thank you for making me think... as usual!! :)) K xx

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2006
Very insightful write.


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