Kingdom of Heaven (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 22, 2006

Ultimately beating swords into ploughshares. I like this overarching perspective that you two in collaboration bring. It gives hope and vision that there MAY be a future peace based in spirituality for the "ordinary" people of the world who just want to collaborate and not coerce. You are an awesome combination. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2006

Exceptional work..indeed a grand message..
I was in in Jerusalem last Oct..fascinating mystical city..the air is thick with history and heavy with hate yet..there hovers above a certain energy that cannot be denied..it's almost tangible..

Vesna:)

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on May 21, 2006

You two created a wonderful write with a strong message.
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 21, 2006

an important, inspired message in this superb haiku ...

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on May 20, 2006

Peter and Huda,

We look at the ordinariness of our daily lives and say, "there's no future in that," but that's exactly where our future is if we can see and grab hold of the many opportunities that are here. A wonderful collaboration to the two of you. Thanks for the specific information and sharing in such a natural way with us who need to know.

Sage

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 20, 2006

You two continue to inspire and amaze with the power in your collective pens; well done, Peter and Huda!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on May 20, 2006

This is a powerful, informative work
ty both
pax A

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on May 20, 2006

Strange how so many seem to consider the portrait you present here as an impossibility while ignoring that it has in fact been a reality. KINGDOM OF HEAVEN is a beautiful reminder that Peace and Love are still valid choices in the world here and now.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on May 20, 2006

Ahh, the history of Jerusalem, the geo-political center of the earth. Such a sorted and powerful past, and, in light of Biblical prophecy, what a powerful future is coming for this city. The Eighth Gate/Golden Gate is what intrigues me most. There is a most stunning promise attached to it.
Enjoyed this offering.
Richard

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on May 20, 2006

Yet another superb collab by blessed poets of peace. Most excellent.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor

Reviewed on May 20, 2006

Wonderful, historical, biblical, truth. Peter, Huda, your combined poems, have been phemonenal. Art

Reviewed by Michael Wells (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2006

Another masterpiece by my favorite poets.

Rivers of blood that flowed in the past
Are forgiven forever, restored by trust
Amen to that calling.

There are many lessons to be learned from your collab and wonderful work together.
Maybe next time you guys can work with me in this Kingdom of Heaven that you created on the Den
God bless you, Huda & Peter
Michael

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on May 19, 2006

You guys are on A roll Peter...outstanding...and to think...they are both of the seed of Abraham

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2006

A perfect duet filled with harmony!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 19, 2006

Two minds producing a masterpiece.

Reviewed by A. Santo (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2006

This is a divinely written prose on one of the best films I've ever watched. :) The kingdom of heaven truly is a Kingdom of Consciousness.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 19, 2006

Your collaboration is a boon for all of us, and a treasure to keep!
So glad you are sharing your expertise with us! Thank you both!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on May 19, 2006

For God doth send deliverance and love

In the shape of two angels from warring sides

It is written with ages. You two give us morsels of wisdom with a fine example of harmony.

Peace above all else!
Susan

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)

Reviewed on May 19, 2006

Peter and Huda,the divine calling between you both is so very needed on earth. The beauty this brings sends a more powerful message that yes we all can celebrate and come together wherever we are at, whatever we believe... A masterpiece here..

((Love & Light, Dove )))

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on May 19, 2006

Another amazing write from your pen keep it up and be blessed in the writing, five stars for you and many blessings too
God Bless
Michelle!