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Computer Girl
by Edwin Larson → (All Poetry by Edwin Larson)
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More than 40% of all teenagers in the U.S. solicit "friends" via their own websites on hosts like myspace, etc. That percentage is growing at an alarming rate. The risks are obvious but how will this further impact society as a whole??

 

 

She’s a computer girl
A strange anomaly
Living in a fantasy
Believing folks
she’ll never meet
in her computer world

He’s an online guy
Doesn’t care to socialize
look people in the eyes
In a darkened room
locked deep inside
his myopic online life

The zeros and the ones collide
with icons in their popup world
on busy streets of silicon
and fancy fonts that dip and swirl

When the magnets turn no more
When there’s no current left to ride
They’ll finally open up the door
to witness what they’ve missed outside…
Computer girl and online guy

 
 
 
 
 


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 Reviews of "Computer Girl"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 30, 2006
A stark and real statement about our "evolving" society, Edwin. Thank you. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on July 26, 2006
PERFECTION!!! This needed to be expressed..it's alarming just how many live in a VIRTUAL world..


I am saving this one..thankyou Edwin..

Vesna

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on July 22, 2006
This is a fantastic write. I especially loved the lines:

"The zeros and the ones collide
with icons in their popup world
on busy streets of silicon
and fancy fonts that dip and swirl"

Great originality!

Your Snuggles

Reviewed on July 21, 2006
perfect write. Something must be done soon

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on July 21, 2006
Oh very true......but it holds true for adults as well

this is a keeper..........
pax A

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on July 21, 2006
Face to face interaction is so very important to keep our society in direct eye contact. When you cannot see a person's eyes, it is hard to read their heart and mind. Most young boys and girls in modern-day society do not know how to bait a fish hook. And we are losing the art of storytelling because of computers. Sitting around a campfire and sharing the ancestors stories preserves a generation. We are also losing many written languages...the elders are dying and the young generation do not want to learn. When an old person dies, a whole library of knowledge disappears if it is not passed on. A thought-provoking piece Edwin.

Sage

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on July 20, 2006
You have raised some excellent points herein, Ed...I kinda think if there was a way to have sex over the internet (though some have tried, most have failed) then our society will never have to meet each other face to face...in some situations, that is not such a bad idea...;) Take care, Ed & rufuz

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on July 20, 2006
Easily add to that another 40% of adults, and you now have a very scary number. In fact, I think I'll go post my poem about online interactions. Well written, Edwin.

Tami

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 20, 2006
Hey have you ever touched on the reality of online friendships leading to relationships. Though you are right some may never meet, some may meet and be a disastor, but hey...there is that small percentage that meet someone special and make a life together. A life that they had only imagined before.
Fee


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