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Dreams
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Lyrics to a song I came up with on the road this morning.


Daddy worked the mines
‘till he died young at twenty-nine
leaving mama with a mortgaged life
and two hungry mouths to feed


A young girl and her brother
dressed in hand-me-downs
from the thrift store back in town
They had each other


And it seemed so real
The things that they would find
inside each others minds
Lost in a space and time
where they were happy


It was all so real
The places they would go
They’d sail on purple seas
climb mountains made of cheese
They had each other


And dreams were all that mattered

Mama did the best she could
working two shifts serving food
at the café down the road
where she would find new love


She couldn’t see and never planned
on betrayal by this man
who promised her his life
And they were married


Soon she was so broken
She couldn’t hear their words being spoken
calling out for help
through tears of shock and pain


It was all too real
the visits in the night
Bloody lips clenched tight
no strength left to fight
Childhood left shattered


And dreams were all that mattered
Yeah dreams were all that mattered

When the morning came
They would run out past the field
through the line of trees
to a spot behind the boulders


It was all so real
that special place they shared
a place where they weren’t scared
where their innocence was spared
while the world outside grew older


And it was oh so was real
With planets to explore
Deserted island shores
lined with golden ore
They didn’t ever ask for more
They had each other


And dreams were all that mattered
Dreams were all that mattered


It was all so real

 
 
 


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 Reviews of "Dreams"
Reviewed on February 3, 2007
This would make an Awesome song is E Major - I think...
YOur words speak so deeply!
Your feelings ring in many ears!
I hear the Twang...
YOur talents are GREAT Edwin!
Glad I gravitated to your space!
WArmly, Warrior Sheee ooxx

Reviewed by Blue Sleighty
Reviewed on January 21, 2007
Nice write. I can relate.

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on January 20, 2007
As you know, I can relate to this on so many levels. The circumstances may be different but the feelings are much the same. Reading this is like feeling the knife turn.
You are a brilliant lyricist!
love Chanti

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 19, 2007
Edwin this is great, I'd love to hear it with melody.
Thanks for your concern...there's no problem, just a wise ass,I had to vent;-)

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 18, 2007
A wonderful poem! I think we should start that in the key of 'C' don't you agree???????????? Holly

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 18, 2007
Enjoyed...Sounds like you've got yourself the makings for a country song. Set in the country, heartache, and for some a harsh look at reality. Nice write, enjoyed the flow of the story much!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 18, 2007
great country roots song with excellant lyrics and even flow.

Fee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
A most compelling song, Edwin. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on January 17, 2007
Conditioning pain in young hearts always find a haven. This is rematkable. Timeless. Brava!
Susan


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