Carry Me (poem) by Edwin Larson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 28, 2007

"Reaching out across the miles
Baby I can close my eyes
and see you lookin' out the window
upon silver wings that wave goodbye"

I never responded to this. I think at the time it was too hard to put my feelings into words. Tonight I read this again with tears in my eyes. You should know Cuddles....I will always carry you inside my heart and soul. In that sense I never left.
I love you so very much!
Snuggs

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on February 3, 2007

Lucky you - YOur recording a Song!
I try to write them, but choruses, I stink at!
This is Amazing!
Sounds like a Keith Urban or
George Straights Treasure!
I can feel your longing in this!
Great Soon to be song!

I hope you come back, and sing for us, and record a bit on the page!
WArmly, WArrior Sheeeooxx

P.s. Thank you! Edwin, your style of writing, gets me thinking of taking a few of my older poems and adding dble verses, and trying my hand/heart at it!
I hope my passion follows through, as yours does!

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer

Reviewed on January 26, 2007

A beautiful song Edwin!!
Gentle, generous, noble love!!
Thanks for sharing it ... a person would be blessed to carry you in their heart!
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on January 23, 2007

moving/touching lyrics
enjoyed!

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on January 22, 2007

Quite a beautiful song Edwin.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on January 22, 2007

this is haunting and loving, very optimistic, despite the scenario, it give light............

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on January 22, 2007

Your words "Carry Me"
"...in memories
of golden hours
and castle dreams"
A very romantic song that would surely be a Wedding hit!
Glad to meet you!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on January 21, 2007

I believe you have written a # 1 song
I can almost hear the melody of this song and I connected
The words to it and it's, going to be outstanding
Song this are very beautifully written lyrics I hop to hear
The recording Soon !!
Love And Peace to You Always ...Morning Star

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 21, 2007

I love songs. I love what you do with lyrics. I appreciate your sharing. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on January 20, 2007

I, too, would love to hear the recording! Beautiful, touching lyrics.

Susan

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 20, 2007

The lyrics are very good, pity we cannot hear the music. Victor

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 20, 2007

I really like the lyrics here. I went over to the Georgia Music Hall of Fame Museum and I've been into music all day. James Brown, Travis Tritt, Allman Brothers, Capricorm records ,R.E.M., Otis Redding...just more and more. Music is an everyday part of our lives and it isn't easy writing good lyrics. You did it flawlessly.
Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 20, 2007

Sweet and lovely Edwin! I'd love to hear the recording

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on January 20, 2007

Very nice

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on January 20, 2007

No one can ever take memories away... This is bittersweet; the emotion is clearly felt. Well written, Edwin.

Tami

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on January 20, 2007

Wonderful romantic song!!!!! Enjoyed!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)