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Loser, Loser
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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Loser, Loser


 


Don’t  know


Not sure


Question, question


Shut the door


 


Mixed thoughts


Confused brain


Think, think


What’s to gain


 


Heart ache


Lies and lies


Cheater’s waltz


Crying eyes


 


Flowers wilt


Sorry, sorry


Candy melts


Don’t worry


 


It’s over


Love lost


Loser, loser


Pay the cost


 


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "Loser, Loser"
Reviewed on January 28, 2005
excellent write, felix; thanks for sharing!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on January 28, 2005
Hang in there Felix! The snow will go away! Then all will return to a normal and even life.

Lisa

Reviewed by Mary Quire
Reviewed on January 28, 2005
Felix, this is very well done. I love the form you have chosen, though brief, it somehow commands your feelings into play.

M.Rose

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on January 27, 2005
This is excellent, Felix. I could hear it being chanted outloud as I read it. Very good job!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 27, 2005
this poems would go off real well being spoken ... it gets into the core of coming to terms with one's own deceit ...

Reviewed by Nila Jamier (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2005
Felix,

you captured in a creative and revealing way the loss.
This one seems a bit sad and well presented. Fantastic job.
Nila:)

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2005
Yes he did capture the pain of loss so well.

Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)
Reviewed on January 27, 2005
Ouch! Reading this is so painful because you've captured loss so well. So very human. Thank you.
Monette

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on January 27, 2005
wow this is fantastic...you said it all so well


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