Smoking Gun (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 25, 2007

Wow. The ending to this sad tale was like getting smacked in the head by a semi. Great writing is made of the unexpected jolt. You are wonderful at that!

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on March 24, 2007

After the events in my hometown yesterday, this piece smacks hard...well written Fee.

Myrna

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)

Reviewed on March 24, 2007

My Fee --

Your ten shades of emotion are so inviting to the sadness of this story. Sad story, and sadder still and frightening the end. Beautifully written and developed.

Kathy

Reviewed by Karen Cino

Reviewed on March 23, 2007

This is a powerful, yet sad write. Love will eventually be the one thing that will kill us all one day of a broken heart.

~hugs~
Karen

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on March 23, 2007

I'd take the wood fire any day! :) But woe to those that can't find anew, and to think there's only one fish in the sea...by ending it all in deep shades of blue, "Smoking Gun"
Excellent write!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

Sad story. Sometimes is true.
Hope you are okay.
Here is a ((Hug)) for you.
Becca

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

now there's someone taking it all a little too seriously...

Reviewed by Laura Mayer (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

Great story/poem Fee. Sad ending, tragic that it does happen.
Hugs, Laura

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

This has a nice flow to it even if it is sad. Thank you for sharing it, Fee. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by John Perry (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

Yo Bro,

I would have been out by now.

Just kidding.

Good write.

later bro.

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

Holy Cow, Fee! This is wonderful! You have such a gift for telling these stories ... I loved it, all of it, right down to the surprise ending. Excellent write!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

This is a very sadden write expressing the reality of what a persons True feelings of lost love, is a tragedy when the intentions of
Destruction go through the minds
And leads to self destruction!!
Outstanding message within this write!!
Love And Peace To You my friend...Morning Star

Reviewed by Selena Dobbin-Gillis

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

So sad but oh so interesting. Thank God I don't and hopefully won't feel the pain of losing my great love. Great write dear cuz. Love & hugs.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

This is such a sad offering....one that touched me!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

So sad, Felix, but not everyone can handle a lost love, it's a shame that one believes this is the only way to relieve the pain. A wonderful write, Thank you.
Love your Cuz, Rose XOXO

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

KEwl Pict. Freeky and KEWL!
OUCh this Poem hits DEEP!
My heart is with ya'!

WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
This gem is a treasure, I want to savorrrrr!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

Lost love is indeed a tragedy when it leads to self destruction.

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

A tragically sad write my friend...Lost love causes desperation to many...Well said,

Michael

Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

Ouch! Your inspirations are scary! But very well done, a stunning read, a story in rhyme. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

Heartbreaking, Felix!!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

W o W , (((Fee))),

A heart stopper, a heart breaker for sure! The 10 shades of regret didn't stop him, though..........excellent, excellent.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

A good write, sad though for "he curses the heavens for what he has not" I always look for what I have and I am grateful for what I would have left afterwards. My sanity and my life back. Lady J

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

Powerful write, Fee; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

how tragic a tale this truly is-a good friend shot himself over just such a scenario-well done write

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2007

Powerful reflection upon an emotional mismatch. They say the balance of power in love, needs and relationships constantly shifts and changes...how sad that their inability to find compromise brought about their demise. Great imagery Fee. Hugs Panda :)