The Virgin Maiden of the Tantramar Marsh
The wild winds blowing across the Tantramar Marsh
Scream revenge for the maiden who died in the night
Pale is the maiden, the sweet tender maiden
Who’s blood was the cost of a demon’s delight
On the shores of the Tantramar the crime he committed
When the gentry met the young maiden walking alone
She pleaded for mercy, but no mercy was given
The pour young maiden’s good virtue he took for his own
Next morning they searched but no body was found
They say she died on the marsh by her own hand alone
Till on the banks of the river they found her possessions
And the blood on his knife told her story unknown
Now some say on the gleaning of the first Harvest moon
On the Tantramar Marsh neath Fort Beaujesour’s heights
You may see a young maiden who once sobbed alone
Now laughs as his ghost hangs forever on cold Autumn nights
Love&Hugs, Rhonda
I'm chilled to the bone. A gripping tale of horror eerily told. The last laugh seems to be on no one - but a wonderful twist it is.
Excellent.
hugs,
Kathy
deb
This beautiful words
I find my self lost in the fog
Now laughs as his ghost
hangs forever on cold Autumn nights
I find these ending hauntingly beautiful!!
The soft tender words the flow and imagery is
Outstanding piece I love it!!!
Love and Peace To You Always your friend ...Morning Star
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*
Gotta agree with Selena!!
Love Tinka
Thank you Cuz, Rose XOXO
You have to expand on these folklores and making them into short stories. This story is power, haunting, yet has a beautiful side to it. And the picture, enhances the beauty of your words.
~hugs~
Karen
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Josie
Love & {{{{{hugs}}}}}
Alexandra*
Oh, my goodness! This. Is my new favorite of yours--you do know how to tell the tale! Suspense; heartache; intrigue...perfection!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Hugs, Laura
Love,
CJ