In the Air... (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 9, 2007

the last few lines say it all ...

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on December 9, 2007

Gives new meaning to "Hard Drive."

Walt

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on December 8, 2007

Delusional acceptance...I like that line. Its a good write at four in the morning. Enjoyed. Lady J

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on December 8, 2007

I agree with Sara. What she said is a riot! Cheers

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on December 8, 2007

Oh Passionate One! You and I are Fantasy Merchants, we create passionate writes for others to get off on, as we get off ourselves!
LOVE YA! SC

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on December 8, 2007

Your muse must be a morning person...this is a splendid piece of writing Fee

Carole~

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on December 8, 2007

You may not be getting the rest but your mind is working overtime dear cuz.A wonderfulwrite you share with us.Thankyou.

Love yaface Cuz XOXOX, Rose

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on December 8, 2007

If this is what you do in the wee hours, Fee, forgive me - but I hope you won't catch sleep in many more nights to come.
First I thought it's another one of your beautiful poems drenched in sensuality, but the last lines caught me off guard and ripped me right back into reality.
Extraordinary!!
R~

Reviewed by Ann Scarborough

Reviewed on December 8, 2007

Oh my! This is so passionate Fee! I love it.
Love,
annie

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on December 8, 2007

the last lines sealed this and i was left feeling sad-cyber relationships leave something to yet be desired

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on December 8, 2007

I love the passionate side of you Fee, it is refreshing to read your poetry!
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Reviewed on December 8, 2007

Great write, very deep and intense.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on December 8, 2007

This is what I would call "safe sex" and it can't get any safer than this. ~ Sara

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on December 8, 2007

Excellent poetry

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 8, 2007

You do your Muse's bidding extremely well!

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on December 8, 2007

* Ah.... And what a way to wake! Filled with passion and want! A desire so thick, you can't resist! I love it! A very deep depth feeling and written poem,I can follow the distance to it's very warm loving heart Sweetie!
Imagery sublime to the minds/hears touch!
Warm hugs and Warmest Blessings Santa Fee, Warrior Purple Lady She ooxoo
STay Positive!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on December 8, 2007

Wellnow, Santa Fee, THIS is a way to wake up in the morning...beautifully expressed passion. :) Cold chower time for meeeeeeeeeeee LOL

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on December 8, 2007

Excellent write, Fee; very well penned! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on December 8, 2007

Fee,

I love the flow of this piece. A strong feeling of desire, curbed by that pesky thing called distance. The ending stays with me; love that ending! Wonderful poem~ Hugs:) Sheila

In the air…

By: Fee

sweet kisses on warm skin