Bachelor's Glory Days (and nights) (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 6, 2008

:)))) You kiss and told!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xx HAPPY NEW YEAR, Darlin, and wishin you many more Glory Days to come!

Reviewed on January 6, 2008

A fantastic flow to this piece, Fee. You trigger memories of my own single days with this poem. And memories cannot be purged by a ring or a piece of paper; they will always be there waiting for a reminiscing. Hugs in the new year:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

Time goes by so fast and all we really ever do is make memories that last. A lovely great write with a lot of feelings.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

Such sweet memories Fee; come tell some more, we're all ears. Love Holly

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

This brings a smile to my face, it has a deep resonance with me...still doing the bachelor thing (ho hum). Excellent pen Felix, a Very Happy New Year to you old friend.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Rafika Anderson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2008

It is sweet how you mix nostalgia with a heavy dose of the present. Your writing gives this moment a grainy feel, while starkly setting up the plot and narrative. I was particularly impressed with your consistency in maintaining rhythm and rhyme throughout the piece. Good job!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

yes, i agree ... you are a romantic at heart ...

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Ohhhhh! The whole scenario is one of a painting and a heart regressing. You've become the romantic Fee in winter. This is your season Sweet Fee.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

such very human, and real visuals are painted here--I love the fact that you bring the reader in so easily with the day to day images and simple moments in the occurance

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

very good write,,, with visions, thoughts, and what ifs,,,,
Christine

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

When all weighed out I wonder which way the scales would really tip. good write. Lady J

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Awesome a peek into the life of the single
How time passes I bet you don’t miss
Your bleary eyes that seen too many late nights
Excellent write of memories of your bachelor glory days!
Peace Love and Hugssss…..Morning Star

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

A glimps into your world of naughty-naughty times!!

Thanks for sharing.....why does men brag about their "score" cards...but not girls...just wondering??

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Damn one night stands...LOL, they always come with a stale taste. (Not that I'd know!!!)
Lucky guy, though. At least she left yer her number.
Great write, Fee.
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Great imagery brings much to ones minds eye!

Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink (Reader)

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

What a great memory -- boy how the time passes by, but how quickly we can relive that moment in our minds. Well done!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Bachelor's days!!!!!!!no momma yelling "get up!" clothes decorating every piece of furniture, empty beer bottles, old Playboy magazines showing their centerfold without blushing, and that "I will call" as the girl disappears from your cave-of-freedom....thanks Fee...
Georg

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

This is really good Felix....the visual was very very real...I liked this.

Allen

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Those days of youth were really fun, though I do appreciate my more settled lifestyle these days. Those days, an hour of sleep and I was good to go for another day and long night, as well as a ten-mile run. Sweet memory filled lines, Fee.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Oh Fee, this is a wonderful youthful memory..It is good to reflect on the past but never to dwell. We are who we are today, because of how we lived our lives..No regrets, just positive movement forward to enjoy the rest of our breath of life...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Memories can truly inspire many thoughts - both good and bad!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Beautiful write, Fee; very well penned! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

Fee,

Absolutely captivating...absolutely beautiful...you sly ole fox, you! Well done! Good on ya, mate!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on January 4, 2008

I can just picture you looking out the window as you watch her sneak away with the look of pride in your face at the successful night of lust from the night before.
Ahhhh the past memories, such a joy to have cuz.

Love ya face Cuz XOXO, Rose