The Poker Game at The Black Rose
By Fee
The poker cards were arrayed as the hands were displayed
And the stakes went up at the Black Rose that night
The money pile was high, and I breathed a sigh
As I flipped my last hole card up in plain sight
Two threes and three ones, adds up to a tidy sum
Black Ed’s two pair looked sad next to my tight
I wore a long grin, as I raked all the money in
Black Ed just swore, and spit on the floor
Sweet Kate and La Belle at the bar, looked on from a far
And gave me winks that I could hardly ignore
I was enjoying the fun, so I didn’t see his gun
Till I was staring straight down its smooth bore
Long Georg let a yell, and the whole room went still
I pushed back my chair, and flung myself clear
Relieved his first shot had went wide of his mark
And the thunder seemed near, as hot lead crazed my hair
Scattering sawdust off of the floor as I rolled once more
Until my own six-gun its leather finally did clear
I fired to my right, when I saw Black Ed in my sight
That Colt was dead-on; I knew old Black Ed was dead
On my left Kate held me tight, La Belle hugged me to the right
As slowly I rose to my feet, picked up that crushed piece of lead
A souvenir of mortality earned, from the good Lord up above
I thanked him for not making me dead, but no one but him cared what I said
As the drinks I paid for that night were on Black Ed…
…
God bless you. Kathy
I wasn't wrong, only poets like Geore and yourself are able to paint such imagery, Fee. I wish I would have lived back then, too. Wild men, wild women, wild horses and the occasional bullet hole. What's there not to love about?
Awesome write, my friend!!
Sending love and have a great weekend,
Becca~
The imagery is exceptional! I'm the one peeping out from behind the bar in fear, praying my dress doesn't get ruined. Your word choices and word order really give this poem that Old West feel. A fun read! Love and Hugs~
Sheila
Love Tinka
Got me smiling. Thanks.
Sweets--RaeLynn
Be always safe,
Karen
be well and happy,
Kathy
Sanja xo
But just wait, I am loading my faithful .44 and we will be talking.
Old Long Georg (I had four Queens, two of them in spades)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Love you cuz,
Selena
Sheriff Fee
O, this is great! Right out of the Old West - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Pee Wee Ed (formerly known, as Black Ed, a long, long time ago.)
PS Which one are you in that picture; my memory ain't as good as it used to be.
Love ya face cuz XOXOXO