Edge Of Insanity (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Such darkness that lies within--hope its all just your imagination. Blessings.

Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

I agree with Georg, you really need an angel to console your sadness. Powerful and realistic write.

Much luv,
Sanja xoxo

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on April 27, 2008

I think I was walking with you. Brilliant. Liz

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 27, 2008

Dark but well written!!

I Know the feeling!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on April 27, 2008

OK, I am scared of Insane, yet I am not as it can be poetic as in your write, and so long as fear is not near...we shall be ok :)
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on April 27, 2008

A nice job of writing here...

Myrna

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

I love the wording in line 6, Fee - we all have that happy mask we wear so no one can see the frown beneath. Dark but realistic! Well done:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

WE all walk those borders and we, sometime, get closer than we even imagine. With the shingles, there are times I concentrat so much on dreaming just to keep the pain away and then....I want to stay in dreams rather than reach back into reality and the pain.
Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

Wow, Fee has gone to the dark side...but done very well!
Come back to light side, where joy and peace reign!

Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

Hope the dark side will go hide for you Fee.
Ron

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

A powerful and touching write. Great imagery. Very well written.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

Sometimes insanity can have its rewards...but I wouldn't like to play with that idea too much

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

Sometimes it feels like a fine line huh? Take good Care!!

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

"...While in the painted light of day
Velcro on my smile of obscurity..."

these were my favorites! The imagery just rips at the insane...
I suppose any time spent here, could surely drive ya nuts!
LOL!
Love and PEACE!~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

A masterful pen indeed my friend.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

Ah Felix this is coming from a dark side right now because you aren't feeling the greatest but with proper rest you will be back and glowing with light and warmth even if it is raining. Thank you for sharing and keep searching until you find you.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

A dark write indeed ... Hope you are feeling better ...

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

I love this, Fee, especially this line " walk the tunnels to search for me On the very edge of my insanity." Excellent writing.

Reviewed by P-M Terry Lamar

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

Having seen those same fogs myself once in a while, I'm glad you're still sane enough to write about it so scrupulously.
Maybe, someday, I'll see you on the other side...

Good writing.

Terry

Reviewed by H Cruz

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

They say insanity and genius are two sides of the same coin, so you may get inspired!

Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

Dark write. Many have been to this dark place as well. For if there was no dark, there would not be approaching light.

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

You described Insanity quite well dear Fee......refusing the spiritual dependency that offers such freedom, one must be insane indeed......he he he.......insanely set free Deborah

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

i like this--a sharing of innermost thoughts--many of them universaly felt at times by many. i love these lines: I walk the tunnels to search for me On the very edge of my insanity

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

Oh my...welcome to my world sweet Fee.....hope your feeling better...Hugsss,much love to you

Reviewed by Gerard Gauthier (Reader)

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

I think I have a time-share in the same place your talking about

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

I think many of us will be joining you, very soon.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

I know this feeling all too well. I think we all need a bit of insanity in us though to survive the crap life gives us. Be well, Felix. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

Chilling write, Fee; very well penned! BRRR!! You gave me the willies (and the waylons and lorettas)! LOL Joke!! Enjoyed this one; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

Oh, my - glad you got that out - now back to the sweet, loving (((Fee))) we all know and love? Wow, this is chillingly penned - effective!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 26, 2008

Fee, you should put the dark thoutghts in a black box and throw it on a little room without light, preferably the home of a black cat that isn't there anyway.
The edge of insanity is when we descend those stone steps down to the dungeon expecting to find an angel to console our sadness.

Georg

I know what shall and shall not be