Teardrops Lost (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 14, 2008

Wow, this one's deep. Hope it's just the muse talking!
Love it, though.
Hope all's good.
Love,
B~

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

Nice one. Love the imagery. Think it's better to remove the last line from the poem. It is not needed and the poem works better when it ends with the line 'just giving up'.

-Lena

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

Fee,
A very sad write. This one could mean something different to everyone, depending on their experiences. Wish you well. Love and Hugs~
Sheila

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

He shall wipe away every tear from their eyes...........Deborah

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Such a sad but strong poem you've penned, Fee ... be well sweetie ... hugs

Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Sad and strong thoughts here.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

So very sad, my friend.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Very nice, I like YOUR words!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Like a soldier just back from the war, at Arlington one rainy day in front of the grave of his buddy, one was spared the other not...and yes, everybody's giving up because it wasn't woth the regrets.
Fee, few words that will reach many. Believe me.
Thanks.

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

How important it is to stay the course...even through heartbreak. Beautiful writng, Fee.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Sometimes when we are faced with realities it becomes difficult to bear, but we must persevere to get through, stay strong....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

a world of pain in a sullen heart, understanding it cannot change what is not reversible ... succinct yet powerful, Felix ...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

such sadness enveloped in your words--well expressed

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Regret....oh the power of this reality.
Such a little word that can not ever be described to the endless depths of it's potent path. But that is not always a bad thing now :)
Great Write!
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

You couldn't have said more if you had used a thousand words. A fine terse verse, Fee! Chin up, friend!
Blessings and Love ~~ Micke

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

A life without regrets is an unlived life. Heartbreak included. As Rose said, tomorrow will be better we all pray. But we will return to the regrets and sorrow another day. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Heartbreaking write, Fee; hope you are okay!

(((HUGS))) and much love (and prayers to you), your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

short and sweet and a little sad.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Fee,

So much lost my friend and not without regrets. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Disheartened words of dispair,,,excellent write Fee

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

So much said so succinctly.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Oh sweet cousin, I know where this is coming from and today you may feel this but tomorrow the sun will shine. I know I have felt this way many times in the past and I am sure I will in the future.
Love ya face cuz XOXOXO. Rose

Reviewed by Sanja Dayslink (Reader)

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

I can't see you giving up on anything. I have been away for awhile and am only back for 2 days and off again. I miss your words and have printed yours and others recent writes to keep my interest flowing. I will be back for longer in a few months. Till then, take care miss y'all. xoxoxo

Much love,
Sanja xo

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

An ocean of sorrow in so few words. Beautiful.

Reviewed by Jeff Mason

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Quite a sadness embedded herein; such deep feeling of loss. -- Jeff