Ultinatum Denied (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on August 4, 2008

The one-nighter can sometimes give a person false hope. Hard for both people to remain unaffected. Great poem, Fee.
Sheila

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on July 30, 2008

This, I think we all can relate to this, you are a master at writing from the heart...

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on July 30, 2008

Whoaaa! Hurt deepens!
Hear my whispers to you Sweets, STay Strong, I love you!
My spirit is always with you, don't you forget it! I feel your the empty pain you feel!
Lonely twisted says alot too! Depression is not accepted! I want to see that sea salt sqalm written!
WRITE ON! and have a better day I do hope!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady Sheexooo

STay Positive!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on July 29, 2008

Oh my,well..you just remember this sweet Fee I adore you big time....please be well..be safe and please Fee keep smiling Ok love...Hugsssss
Love Always,
Chanti Lace xo

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on July 29, 2008

I once said "I Love You"...then I was like OMG!!
"I can't believe I said that & I didn't mean it"-lol
we both laughed...we ended up getting married later that year :)
lol.....passion has its own tounge & voice sometimes, and yes can be very misleading too. Lust & Love are very related to each other in many ways.
Much Love & Happiness To You Fee!!
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on July 29, 2008

i think, though among the few--that the pssion may well be worth it!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 29, 2008

Things done in the heat of the moment leads to sadness!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 29, 2008

Felix My heart feels run down after reading this as I feel hurt and pain if you feel hurt and pain. They say it helps to share it rather then keep it in. Hope you have a wonderful day.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on July 29, 2008

Things often done in the heat of the moment often lead to sadness. Well penned, Fee.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 29, 2008

name on crumpled napkin

I'm sure you brought back memories for quite a few on this one, my friend.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 29, 2008

Ultimatum denied...man, it should be done with an offer she can't refuse...

Georg

Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller

Reviewed on July 28, 2008

Ahhhh--you do bitter well. Nice bit of venting here.
Ultimatums offered
accepted out of need
are only lover�s lies
Love this. I think we all can relate on one level or another.
Amazing how you can reach inside and find the feel.
Sweets--RaeLynn

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on July 28, 2008

,,,, Moving poem of life's walks,,,Very well done Fee!
Love, Christine

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 28, 2008

Hope you are okay, Fee; you sound depressed. Know that even though you might not believe in God, you are always in my prayers and thoughts! Love ya!

(((HUGS))) As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on July 28, 2008

Hello Fee! You sound so down, I hope there's nothing wrong in the home front. Any good news about your sister?

My hubby is still not feeling well, the doctor won't be able to see him until tomorrow.

Have to keep him company while he's not feeling well. This is my home front news, and I'm feeling down too.

I hope you'll be feeling much better soon.

All the best to you and your sister,

Sandie May :o(

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 28, 2008

This piece sounds so down and heartsick like all the disappointments of the world rest upon your shoulders, deeply profound....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on July 28, 2008

Hey Felix,this is a very good poem.I enjoy reading it,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on July 28, 2008

Reality of the morning can suck. Wonderful write. Liz