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Downtown Tonight
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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Not sure where this came from but woke up with the first two lines on my mind and the rest just fell in for the ride...

Downtown Tonight

By: Fee

 

And the Karaoke Queens like some old has-beens

Sing their songs to their armchair quarter backs

While the model like pose in fishing net hose

Strut their stuff on the wrong side of the tracks

 

And I walk along blind I know no love will I find

On a another dirty bean town Saturday night

A pimp dragging a hooker, who once was a looker

He’s keeping his bus’ness hidden from sight

 

And I walk seeking love in the stars shining above

Now and then glimpsed through the city smog

Drinking eight dollar wine that never tasted so fine

Replaying my past indiscretions misted in fog

 

And the lonely cop on the beat is feeling the heat

He keeps yelling now just move along folks

In strobe lights he stands guard over his tiny backyard

As he puts up with the clichéd donut jokes

 

And the old and the tired, the sick and the wired

Persist in this disguise they call life

Hungry children are crying and people are dying

And the irony of it all cuts like a knife

 

And at night I lay down my head in a ten dollar bed

In a cheap fluorescent box that I now call home

No more satin sheets or poetry written by Keats

No HD TV or one touch cell phone

 

And the bed next door squeaks and the taps all leak

My pets are a the roaches and mice

Yet I find comfort here far, far from you there

As all things must come with a price

 


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 Reviews of "Downtown Tonight"
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on October 26, 2008
Not a place to be, Sad write Fee, but too true. :):) Cherrypie

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 22, 2008
well written expression of some of the more dismal pieces of life

Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
Reviewed on October 22, 2008
I like the rhythm of this, Fee. Yes, it's sad. But sometimes such is life. Great write. Especially for just 'popping' in your head in the middle of the night.
Love,
Becca~

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 22, 2008
Quite powerful, and I remember being in such a place a time or two myself.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 22, 2008
Felix I know I have said this before a time or two but this is one of the geatest you have ever written. Your words took us through a lifetime, fantastic write Cuz. Thank you for sharing.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on October 22, 2008
Excellent writing, although sad. The rhyme in this is excellent. Well done.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 22, 2008
You took a stroll among the shadows of skid road of a sick city that doesn't believe in anything anymore.
Probably one of your top shelf poetry, that if there is not one above it, because this poem deserve to be at the top, alone.
Brilliant!

Georg


Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Grounded in reality for many. Way to paint a picture, Fee.
Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
i really enjoyed the direction you took this poem through ... excellent rhyming also ...

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Oh my, as always sweet Fee ..your words take me away at times...well done indeed...keep smiling ....Hugsssssss

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
No suger and spice fairytale write, but reality at it's sad, truthful best, from a Master Poet! HUGS! SC

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Sometimes life for the downtrodden can seem hopeless, but there is always a way out if one is willing to sacrifice and above all try, wonderful words of wisdom...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
excellent double rhyme lines Fee - this is great rolling blues country - chorus and to the bridge ---> send it off, it's a cut above :))

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
we all get these feelings and the best thing to do is write about them and get them out in the open. Great work Fee. So many people are living this life you describe.
hugs
kathy Lynn

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
The muse in us can stir the gray matter that looks into the recesses of our mind and there but for the grace of God go I.

Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Incredible writing, Fee; wow! Excellent!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed on October 21, 2008
A very deep write cuz,must have been some kind of a night you had.

Love you cuz

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Oh, how sad Fee, I'm so glad it's something from down deep and not near the surface. Fantasic, sad write. Isn't it wierd how things can just come to us. It's like other people live inside and want to come out. Love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Wow! This stabs my heart! Powerful emotive poetry -- extremely well expressed!

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Ummm...seems like my life, at times. Nice write,

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed on October 21, 2008
Fee, country music just don't get no better'n this un. Great work!


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