Star God Warrior (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on December 6, 2008

WOW!
Amazing!
Creative!
and Understood!
WE must find "our own" STAR! and Shine Brightly!
Warmest of Blessings in Poetry, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on December 2, 2008

Oh Goodness Fee!! I agree with Michelle,
where, oh where is the hostility of vengeance going to shine? Nowhere answered the Star of Hope, those shooting fires are but sparks from the pits of hell...It is a good message Fee, that our children need love so no-one is lost to demise & the reprisals within anger�s revenge...they are depleted when left alone
without love�s guidance (Star)
Much Love Always
Peace, Love & Poetry
Embraced~Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on December 2, 2008

Felix you have indeed touched my heart with this one this morning.

Love ya face XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on December 1, 2008

Gripping, Fee. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on November 30, 2008

The cruely of mankind upon each other. He who turns a blind eye will one day reap the pain....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on November 30, 2008

Powerfully penned sadness, Fee ... well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on November 30, 2008

How very sad that these childrenn are ignored and abused. That is why there is so much grief in this world.
Hgs
Kathy

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on November 30, 2008

This is so different for you, when I saw the title i was really intrigued to read it, and it didn't fail to impress. I find it interesting reading the comments below to see how different people look at it. It means it is very thought-provoking, which is always cool :)

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on November 30, 2008

This is an exceptional writing. You are good. lindalaw

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on November 30, 2008

Powerful write, Fee. Bless the children who need so little and don't even get that. I think more and more are becoming aware of how the collective all of us have ignored these needs too long. I feel a change coming. Excellent write. Liz

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on November 30, 2008

Powerfully penned sadness, Fee; very well written! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on November 30, 2008

To find our own star--that is the gift

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on November 30, 2008

Fee,,,You have written beautifully a story of sadness and tragic,,this should be published every where!
Love,Christine

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on November 30, 2008

Fee, this is so powerful and so sad...so well written.

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on November 30, 2008

Fee,
You know I write for the abused children, how sad that they are ignored, sometimes hit on, and verbally abused. They grow up angry and bitter and do the same to their own kids. I liked your version, clever and thought provoking.

Blessings and huggs,
~Linda

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on November 30, 2008

This poem is so true. There are many of such child around. If only the parents and everyone would give a little bit of kindness and attention...

Sandie Angel :o(

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on November 30, 2008

Neglect does add up to a twisted mind down the line for everyone yearns to know love and to be wanted.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on November 30, 2008

Since Columbine to the last Findland school massacre we have been informed that those pushed from our colective gang midst are 90% in the risk zone of becoming deranged by isolation, paranoids and wishing to going with a bang to be noticed.
Yes, childs ask for so little, if we insist in ignoring them we can't expect a normal response in their future...

Georg

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on November 30, 2008

Yes Fee, totally sad but true, children ask for so little and sometimes completely ignored and grow up with extreme anger for the loss of love and understanding. What a write you created here, it reaches out and grabs the heart and gives it a jolt. Love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

Reviewed on November 30, 2008

WOW! So beautifully powerful and intense! HUGS! SC