Wave On Wave (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 21, 2009

I agree with you Fee. When I watch the waves they either bring me joy or unhappiness. this is such a wonderful work.
hugs
Kathy

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on February 19, 2009

WOWwwwwwwwww! sadness and melonchally I feel in your expressions!
Another for my library to read over again...
Such imagery you clearly have felt!
"Wave on Wave" you wonderfully but sad and ridden with loneliness you sure did display!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExooo

Stay Positive! Through the warmth of your inner serenity...

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)

Reviewed on February 19, 2009

aah...so sad but very nicely penned... wishes.neerja

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on February 16, 2009

Beautifully heartbroken poem.I enjoy reading it,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

Salty tears, unlike the tides soon run out as we move ahead with life. While you are on the beach throw out a line for another fish from the sea. Good job.

~W~

Reviewed by Connie Faust

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

This makes me want to cry for that lost love, that lonely lost feeling of longing as the tears fall. Beautiful.
Connie

Reviewed by Michelle Mead

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

Loved this, really well-written, love love it :)

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

Fee,
I really enjoyed the imagery here, particularly the saw grass. A sad tone about this poem. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by H Cruz

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

Geez Fee, sometime's I'm just a loss for words!

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

Do not be sad. Do as you feel and let the waves bring love back into your heart. I know it is difficult to lose a loved one and woder why? But there is still more to life out there for you to enjoy. The waves of he ocean content me and serenely comfort me too.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

A beautiful poem Fee, even wrapped in sadness...

Carole~

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

Reminds this poem a solitary tall tower where a prisoner heart of love is bleeding tears of sadness.
As usual the author gripes the heart of his readers and squeeze hard.

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

Beautifully penned sadness of a heart that aches.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

Oh Fee, this poem speaks many waves of longing and lost love. I felt as though I was walking along side of you feeling what you are feeling in this poem. It is so real, and that is what a good writer does, makes the reader feel their words as if they are for real.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

I can tell you where I am, though I doubt that is who you are worrying about...;-) ed

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

Fee,,,I read this earlier and could not find the words.... this is one of the most heartfelt powerful poems I have ever read....I felt like I was right with you as you walked....such deep thought and each thread woven from within a hurting heart. A masterpiece!
Hugs
Christine

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

beautiful in its longing-i love it!

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

you romantic love, can inscribe evocative emotions of love written through & through just as you do upon the oceanic shores of "Wave On Wave"
Much Love & Inspirations
Vickie

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

Such a sad poem Fee. Eloquently written tho. I love the photo too. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

Beautifully written, altho a painful lost love... hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

Your words and photo capture the pain of lost love.
Beautiful line...salted tears flow wave on wave

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

I've read into some pain, and longings in this poem. Sounds like you're searching for the love that is gone. I hope you will find it once again very soon.

Sandie Angel :(

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

This is so beautiful Cuz, a great mind you have there and I thank you for sharing.

Love ya face Cuz XOXOXO, Rose

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

Powerful emotions here, Fee; hope you are okay! You are in my prayers!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

This broke my heart I can't imagine this pain...love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

Powerfully heartbreaking, Fee, effectively penned. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.