Purgatory Of Hearts (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 22, 2010

Trapped in inky black space of a once empty heart
Lies the purgatory where all romance sins reside...
your first two lines alone captured my heart, what a wise man you are and oh btw, I like your new profile picture, it captures you well :-)

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on March 22, 2010

Exactly!! Without life, love n laughter, there is nothing. All this cometh from above too xx Hugsss Cherrypie

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on March 22, 2010

Wise words Fee, effectively penned.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 21, 2010

Keep living in that Pontiac & keep her alive with duct tape & fiberglass & resin...My old wreck has NO holes fortunately but no paint as well...e

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on March 21, 2010

Perfection made into words. Love it. Liz

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 21, 2010

What a ballad this would make besides being excellent poetry that carves your emotions on the readers mind and leaves a lasting imprint.

George

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on March 21, 2010

Fee,,,I really like what Vickie had to say...Yes...to live, love and laugh is a great plan, but what else is there? unfortunately tears and sadness play into our lives as well, it is just the way it is...and if one did not have heart it would be easy,,but you my friend have the biggest heart of all :)
Hugs,
Chrissie

Reviewed by kg cummings

Reviewed on March 21, 2010

and there are those that suffer and die... your poem is full of hope for the down hearted, by expressing what you would do. excellent. Kathy

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on March 21, 2010

Both Sadly and Beautifully penned. I'm assured well understood by our friends here. LadyJ

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on March 21, 2010

and I join you Fee in authenticity
love does not harm others
nor does love cast shackles
love is knowing the freedom to love above oneself
and all games are mere losers to their own foolishness
where no trap can keep love's wings
Love's Liberation & Bounty
Vickie

Reviewed by Holly Ibbitson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 21, 2010

A profoundly wise write that includes the answer for me anyway.

and I?

I will go on to live love and laugh�for what else is there?

Blessings, Holly

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on March 21, 2010

the depth in this write is wonderful!

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 21, 2010

Emotion runs high in this one. Deep and well written. Thank you Fee for such fine work!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Paul Judges

Reviewed on March 21, 2010

Very well put together, Felix

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 21, 2010

"...atonement is unattainable in this morass of sadness..." where your only hope is to continue to descend the winding and cold stone stairs going down to the dungeons were you will be assure that hope is an Utopia.

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 21, 2010

Powerful emotions, Fee; well done! Love the piccy!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 21, 2010

Such sad late night thoughts, my friend.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 21, 2010

Deep, deep thoughts indeed, my friend. Well said too. Nice write.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on March 21, 2010

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on March 20, 2010

Yes, heavy thoughts, Fee. Thought-provoking. This does feel sad throughout. Maybe the words of someone feeling a little steamrolled by life. Or maybe my current view of life has me reading it that way. lol. Great poem.
Sheila

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on March 20, 2010

I admire the honesty in your ponderings Fee. The heart is a resillient muscle and it gets beat to death and then continues to beat. Man! I wish I were as strong as some hearts!
I've missed you Fee.
Love and Blessings,
Susan