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Eternally
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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I happened to check my stats page this morning after seeing a fellow den member had reviewed my poem that I wrote for my 400th poem posted. I have now posted well over 1500 poems and had over 700,000 hits. So...it is about time I thanked all who have read, reviewed or commented on my work...it does mean so much to me.


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Eternally

 

Between the tears falling like soft rain

On a bed crisp, sterile and white

Their conversation was trapped eternally

in the glare of fluorescent white light…

 

She said: "I shall perish without you!"

He said: "In your heart I never will die."

She said: "I beg of you…baby don’t leave me."

He said: "Oh baby I’ll love you always, don’t cry."

She said: "Who will bring me my morning sunshine?"

He said: "I’ll send it to you each day from the sky."

She said: "Baby please just let me go with you."

He said: "Dear one someday together with angels we'll fly,"

 

Sadly she watched his breathing turn shallow

She held his hand as he breathed his last sigh

Now she hoards away all their past memories

Until that day when she learns how to fly…

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Eternally"
Reviewed on December 24, 2010
this is lovely Fee, and these moments
in our lives to be witness to ascension
and the birth of death is such special
spiritual experience-even through abundant sorrows
your poem reveals such beauty in a lover's last breath

Beatitude Rising
Vickie

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on December 23, 2010
Like a soft and gentle breeze, Fee. Beautifully done. Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on December 23, 2010
Quite simply stunning!!!!!! Your poety is amazing, Fee! I'm not surprised by your stats!

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on December 22, 2010
Lithe, supple, sinewy are the rhythms of your verse.
But formal finesse aside, the sense of the piece is a pair
of hearts beating as one, the sorrow of loss cannot eclipse
the certain solace of a consummation devoutly held.
Your images stir up much more than mere sentiment as they
commemorate a settled love that slips the surly bonds of
earth to measure the true worth of its undying nature.


Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on December 22, 2010
Beautiful work.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 22, 2010
This gave me tears welling up...sad & happy at the same time...Ed

Reviewed on December 22, 2010
Fee,

So beautiful and tears at the heart. Soon they will be reunited in heaven.

Mary

Reviewed on December 22, 2010
So very beautiful, it's always my great pleasure to read you Fee.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 22, 2010
beautifully sad

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 22, 2010
Eternal love shines forevermore, beautiful Fee~
Hugs,
Chrissie

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on December 22, 2010
Abounding in beauty and eternal love...
Peace and love to you,
Christine

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on December 22, 2010
Such sweetness among such saddness. I believe this kind of love it eternal...

Much peace, love and light, and congrats!

Amber

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 22, 2010
True Love truly is Eternal.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on December 22, 2010
Such sadness,Fee, but filled with an eternal love. And congratulations to you on your number of hits and posts!

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on December 22, 2010
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva


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