(De)fenceless (poem) by Felix LeRoy Perry on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 1, 2011

choice between logic or love - I say hell with logic, love is hard to come by in todays world, take it and go! Don't look back, you can;t change the past but can live for right now. Wonderful write Fee.

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on January 31, 2011

Embracing the power of the sea. Great writing, as always!

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on January 28, 2011

Diverse imagery, Fee. Nicely written:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald

Reviewed on January 26, 2011

A really good work. Sometimes we have to be careful what choices we make .
hug
Kathy

Reviewed by Chessly Nesci

Reviewed on January 26, 2011

Best choice is to listen to the gut. It never lies and always leads us in the right direction. I can so relate to this writing. It feels like my life. We have to lay dormant until ready to face our choices, then let everything out, or shake the dust off so the light can be seen. Beautiful, honest, heartfelt poetry my friend. :) May your light always be bright! ~Chessly

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on January 26, 2011

Poignant thoughts on what could be seen as choices made...splendid writing, Fee.

Carole~

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on January 25, 2011

The picture is perfect illustration of a fine poem Fee.

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill

Reviewed on January 24, 2011

The "sad tears of a dove" is capturing line. The dove of love, the dove of peace, the dove of gracefulness, all sad to tears. Nice write Fee.

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by Richard King

Reviewed on January 24, 2011

Powerful words. Not sure where they are Leading me, but I'm feeling(Defenseless as they compel me to follow. PS: Your photographic skills would seem to rival your considerable skills with the pen.

Thanks for sharing both. Dick

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on January 24, 2011

Amazing Ku's, Fee....perfectly captures the essence of your picture....getting to be a real photography buff! This is very kool!

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 24, 2011

Wonderful, but melancholic lines; well done, Fee!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on January 23, 2011

Melancholy, to me, Felix, I can't help but see the other poem(s). It's like Escher. A puzzle. Until it stops.

cold wind drowns my voice
sad tears of a dove
shakes off dark of night

'shakes off dark of night' is the key to the whole piece. Lovely, spirit-and-mind.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on January 23, 2011

There is a sensitivity in this poem that leads the reader into a world that is gray and dreamy, but also a bit sad.

Another epic Fee poem..

Much peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Regis Schilken

Reviewed on January 23, 2011

Sounds like you can describe cold weather very well. It is supposed to be either 0 degrees or lower during the night. All is in a frigid chill. Our three rivers are frozen over.

rege

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on January 23, 2011

Hope you wore your rubbers.
Looks cold and wet. Lovely reflections.

~W~

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on January 23, 2011

Hmmmm, after reading this it really makes me long for spring and new growth..color and sunshine, it has been one cold winter! Nice work
Hugs,
Chrissie

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on January 23, 2011

I love this one, leading the reader into serious and deep thoughts...
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on January 23, 2011

Fee,

a very beautiful poem.

Mary

Reviewed by katie peterson (Reader)

Reviewed on January 23, 2011

Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley expresses my thoughts to a tee.

It's beautiful,Felix! Thank you!!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 23, 2011

mysterious-really neat write!

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on January 23, 2011

this is raw emotion for me Fee
and I can totally feel the contemplation
the thinking...the thoughts...all those choices
and most of all the love & wanting

Through Love's Bounty
Vickie

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 23, 2011

Powerfully sad.

Reviewed by The Poetess

Reviewed on January 23, 2011

This one reminds me of a crossroad. I hope Love is chosen to Light up the dawn. Beautiful as your writings are.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 23, 2011

Sad, yes, but a necessary sadness all the same..e

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 23, 2011

Very nicely done, Fee.