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Yours?
by Charles B. Neff → (All Poetry by Charles B. Neff)
Tuesday, September 6, 2016 Rated "G" by the Author.

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By chance, I found an old jotting. It seemed vaguely familiar. But maybe it really wasn't mine.
Yours? *Corners form* *Enclosure for the fire* *The dancing and the raiment* *Corral the horse* *Weighted with ornament* *Blanket and bearing* *Heritage is an arch* *Uniting space* *Fingertips spark* *A fragile bond for* *Enduring love in* *Future ceremony* These words on the back of An unfinished crossword Fall from a much-traveled bag Fragments of my own writing Evoking images and mood They hang tantalizingly on edges Of fractured faint experience I’m stuck in reconstructing The where when and why The longer I think The hazier it is I give up Did I dream Copy or steal If it’s yours Let me know Charles B. Neff September 6, 2016

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on February 8, 2017

i like this

Never Stop writing!!
m

Reviewed by Alexander Goldstein

Reviewed on September 6, 2016

and I'm telling you, it's completely yours because this free-style set of notes will no one wish to declare as one's own composition; that's why it is originally priceless. A daring musical decision. Cheers, alex

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

It's interesting how one could write notes as a hedge against forgetting something important and then forget what it was about when the message appears later where it was stored but forgotten.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Not mine. Not mine. Not . . . Eh . . . You have the makings of a dozen poetical writing amid all that jumble of thoughts!

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

LOL!!! Ya got me laughing!!!! One can reach one's hands out beneath a flock of flying swans. The odds of catching a feather, and those are big feathers, might be pretty good!! 'Loved it!

Love ya!

Jane