Unscathed it continued
like some sort of video game champion
avoiding all the traps and pitfalls
while singing the old song
about the woman
the destination crept up
where newly dead life forms gathered
to be digested and converted
“Yes” the fly said
“This is where I will deposit my children”
Prolific little creatures they are
when feeding begins
“Shall we eat north or south?
Why not both?”
Intestines became a favored treat
as tiny maws began ingestion
thinning walls into transparent
films of agony
Decimation then falls upon
lungs, liver, gallbladder and heart
soundless chewing
turning form to liquid
flesh caving in on itself
leaving a just a shell
as more eggs are laid
Elizabeth
~Linda
I'm just glad I had not eat before reading this! You've quite the churning imagination, to say the least.
There are people and situations that can leave us with the feelings of being eaten alive..You've captured that scenario well here.
Well done!
Lisa
Don't worry the maggots are not real it is just what is seems like when someone causes you to feel like your insides are being eaten alive. But if you must know i did have rice last night if that puts better images into your head
Icky Sticky poem, (do you know Ed Kostro?)
cynth'ya
Ewwwwwwwwwwww...creepy! What the eyes can see...chillingly effective poetry, Sir!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :0 *screaming*
(If I have nightmares, I'm blaming yew!!! LOL) WELL DONE!!!!!!
Love Tinka
Thanks for back reading my work;-)
Eileen