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The Vision Jammer
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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My Veteran's Day Tribute from my CD THE BIKER CHRONICLES


Poem Artwork


 

The Vision Jammer
(abridged)



 

Southern Comfort permeated
his thirsty
veins,


racing visions of steel
dreams through his
intoxicated
mind.


Bats flew circles above
the Vision Jammer,


as he rode the
moonlit asphalt
hard and fast.


In Nam, the
Vision Jammer
existed from
self-teachings on
the power of
fantasy and illusion.


It kept him alive,
and delivered him
home safe,
but not sound.


No Vet ever came
home sound.


War fragment
reminiscence
collectively floated
on top of what
was left of
gray matter.


His war-stained hands
pulled the Red Barons
over his inflamed eyes,


and he snugged the
stars-and-stripes
bandana around
his forehead,
not about to lose
a piece of America
again.


He laughed in
the wind, knowing
war had not killed
him,
came damn close
more bloody
times than he
cared to
remember.


His hard shell
toted a
disgusting amount
of unwanted
foreign steel---
the proud,
red, white, and blue
result for enlisting
for Uncle Sam.


The Vision Jammer
does appreciate. 
War does that
to you.


Makes you appreciate
even your numb
legs, steel plates,
and crippled spine.


The power of
fantasy and illusion
is how the
Vision Jammer
spends his
days and nights.


The corridors of a
Veterans hospital is
his road, and the
iron he rides is a
wheelchair.



 

Copyright 2005 Keysta D. Lorean aka Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "The Vision Jammer"
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on November 20, 2005
Awesome work! BRAVA! BRAVA! BRAVA!
Flowed quite well, indeed!
Becca

Reviewed on November 12, 2005
excellent imagery in this powerful write, sage; brava!! may god bless you always!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

and may god bless our veterans, past and present!! :)

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on November 12, 2005
Wow..this is POWERFUL!!!!
You have amazing talent.

~Linda

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 11, 2005
your perceptions of reality are gripping, real and potently expressed ...

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on November 11, 2005
wow...i usually avoid the war type of writes...glad i read this one...different and well done...thanks

Reviewed on November 11, 2005
Sage,

Can hardly see for the tears streaming down my face--oh, this is beautiful. Real. Honest. Wonderfully earthy tribute--thank you, baby. :) BRAVA, and a heartfelt *salute* for remembering those who gave some, and especially gave all.

(((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla. (USAF, 1983-85)

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on November 11, 2005
A Beautiful Realistic Tribute. Thank you for all you do for them,
This just brings tears streaming. The price they pay for US to be Free is too astronomical. I Salute each and everyone of them! and Thank Them with all my ever-lasting love and gratitude.

Beautiful! So very, very touching.

Thank you Sage,
Tracey42xoox(c :)


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