Rubber Snakes and Dog Whistles! (poem) by Sage Sweetwater on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 13, 2006

Blimey... I had that exact pair of shoes when I was 13... spent all me pocket money on 'em and then got the heel stuck in a grating while crossing the street... nearly cost me me life. And the nose-bleeds from the excess height were a bit unmanageable. :)) Guess some of us are just plain flip-flop sandal girls when all's said and done! But, my, I wish you had been around to meet La Belle Rouge who sadly left the Den about a year ago... this sooooo reminds me of our Scarlet Flaming Redhead of the Utmost Taste, and she and Jude did quite a few collabs together... guess you got the Lead Poet taped here, Sage... or is it on the end of a lanyard??! Let me know when it's the start of the hunting season!! Gotta luv it... LOL Kate xx :))

Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)

Reviewed on February 13, 2006

your humor is priceless!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on February 13, 2006

Haha! Thanks for the big smile. I knew Jude would like this, looked down at the reviews and I see I was right. Fun work, Sage. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Robin Labenberg

Reviewed on February 12, 2006

OMG..You are too funny..Good Good you..poem, apology,stockings, heels, and nails polished!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 12, 2006

Two snakes on my ankle and i wouldn't have to whack it off, as I would die of a heartattack before I had the chance too do so...Ed

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 12, 2006

Sage, you are a real hoot, and your brilliance is a delight to witness!

Eileen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 12, 2006

lol ... my lips are puckered up. can you hear me whistle? ... next time, instead of writing a poem, i'll just wack it off, not being able to avoid my perfusion, i mean confusion ;)

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on February 12, 2006

You are clever, witty, talented and in tune with the poetic and subliminal sounds of nature and the world.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on February 12, 2006

You are controversial, tongue and cheek, multi talented, but most of all brilliant Sage
When you provoke reactions from all quarters like you do, then you know you are doing your job at the top of your ability ....:)!
Peter

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on February 12, 2006

You conjured up images in every line. Think I'll go call a coyote. ;-)

Ron

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 12, 2006

Sage,

Fun read; thanks for sharing your wit with us today in the Den! BRAVA; very well done! The pic is cool, too, but I don't know about that snake...I don't care for them...LOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 12, 2006

With a photo like that you know Alice Cooper :-) I'll have to come back later to see Jude's reaction to this one LOL. Very interesting write that lead me back to Jude's port, then here again :-)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 12, 2006

Sage,

LOL...excellent write! You are the leader when it comes to firebranded, sensual, thought provoking poetry--good stuff!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.