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Spit!
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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She stands up like a woman
in a terrifying pose, shy
and retreating, agressive only
if provoked.

With no room for error, she
just wants to be free in
wilder lands, slither
into your wild.

 You provoke
her flaring cobra hood,
s
pitting out copiously.

Using pigments from stone
on handmade paper, she is
adorned in mythology
and art garlanded by
a New Delhi artist.

Zigzagging, she will
penetrate your crevice,
coiling up from pigment-stained
paper, while she holds your
cosmic pearl clamped in
her powerful jaws.

Her
exaggerated phallic shape
has won a role as your totem,
ride her (uraeus) cob
ra of wisdom,
s
ymbol of divinity, death, and renewal.

Spit!



 

Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist, brainchild of Sage Sweetwater Creative Properties, flagship of Stone Creek Woman




 


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 Reviews of "Spit!"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 5, 2006
your creative powers coil and an capture the imagination of supernal design ...

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on March 4, 2006
I'm so proud of myself. Some of your language stirred up my childhood phobia of snakes I thought long dead, but I made it through. Sharp poem, Sage. :-) ~~Nordette

Reviewed on March 4, 2006
Oh, deeply powerful, outstanding! Loved this,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 4, 2006
Your gift shines through your verses once again, Sage. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on March 4, 2006
I like this...women can be as cunning and powerful as a poisonous cobra! Watch out!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on March 3, 2006
Love this write, as always I am intriged by what you share :-)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 3, 2006
Sage you spit these poems out like you are the master Cobra of all time;-)I wonder where all the inspiration and creativity comes from!
You are multi-talented!

eT

Reviewed on March 3, 2006
Sage,

This is excellent, and the pictures are great! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on March 3, 2006
Sage,

WOW!!!!!!!! I'm with the rest of the board--they said what I wanted to, more eloquently than I could have. Fantastic write!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on March 3, 2006
Dear Sage
Is the cobra your totem?
The Sydney Mardi Gras is on tonight! :-)
Creation to you 'Wizard of the Den'.
Love, Suzie xox :-)

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on March 3, 2006
A W E S O M E !!!
Just sign me 'Wowed.' ;)

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on March 3, 2006
Your sensuality and libido rear up like a coiled spring again Sage
in this provocative and compelling pen
The Snake symbolises sensuality and intelligence, and you have shape shifted into another semblance of your imagination and design, with powerful overtones of sexual prowess and vitality
Keep them coming Wizard of the Den
Peter


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