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In The Ghetto
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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they sit around
trash-can fires at
night in the smelly alley,

In the ghetto...

drinking wine from
polished steer horns,
unkempt, pregnant from
trading sex for food, blankets,
and wine, in that order,

In the ghetto...

the grandmother is
not proud of conceiving
her daughter this way, her
daughter followed in her footsteps,

In the ghetto...

"we need to quit
sleeping with men for
our things," the woman
spoke like one who had
just discovered her mission
in life when she looked at her
precious granddaughter who had
no shoes, "I will not raise this baby in
an alley, I will not let her be taken in like
I was, then my daughter," then her mama cried,
the child's feet were so cold,

In the ghetto...

"Let the sewing
factory come!"  a woman
shouted "No! This is where
we live, we will cook our beans
in our kettles over trash-can fires
at this address,"

In the ghetto...

the untidy woman
wailed, the cops could
pull up at any minute, disband
the women, put out the trash-can
fires, confiscate their wine, and call
social services to come pick up their
children,

In the ghetto...

dirty, tattered
blankets stretched
across a makeshift
clothesline, babies and
children openly bathed in
in the gutters in the alley when
it rained, no compassion for the
homeless, street people, hippies,
flower children, wastrels, Viet Nam
vets to the gypsies who claim and defend
their spaces on the street, some die trying,

In the ghetto...

proprietor of the
bowling alley donates
chipped pins and warped
balls for alley bowling, at night,
they line up a row of trash-can fires
on each side of the alley and bowl pins
over with the help of Thunderbird,

In the ghetto...

tonight, the trash-can
fires extinguish early, no
game here anymore, they
leave the gutter, shut down
the alley,

In the ghetto...

early morning, the
tarpaulin shelters come
down, the only thing left
behind are the trash-can fire
scars, rings in the melted pavement
from the 50-gallon drums---drums they
are trading for tambourines and clay dreams,

then her mama
cried,

In the ghetto...


Authors note:  These are extracted lines from my next lesbian pulp fiction novel to be released BLUE CORN WOMAN; all I had to do to adapt In The Ghetto to poetry was call upon Elvis and find my rhythm and meter.  I thank famous cowboy poet Waddie Mitchell who I studied for years to learn a marketable style...


Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist




  

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 Reviews of "In The Ghetto"
Reviewed on December 18, 2006
IN the ghetto- Elvis's song.... WAy Kewl!
This is Powerful SAge...

I truly enjoyed the reading here!
Congrat.s on your high viewing~
And... It's your Birth-day huh, Well, Have many more Happy thrilling rides!
Happy Holidays to you and yours!BE Happy * Be SAFE!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on December 16, 2006
To know that such horrors still exist in what we call "civilized" society ... shame, shame, shame.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 14, 2006
As usual, I find your poem most compelling and powerful, Sage. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace and happy birthday,

Regis

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on December 14, 2006
Hmm...
From my male perspective Sage it seems to me more and more women are having to sleep with men to get their things. Thirty five years ago it seemed we were getting away from that.
I wonder what went wrong? (not a real question, you and I both know the social force that condemns women to slavery)
best
Ian

Reviewed by Blue Sleighty
Reviewed on December 13, 2006
Sage- you are awesome. I like the write. And you know why.

OK, FIREBRAND- your comments got it rolling. As far as homelessness in the US (and I guarantee you I KNOW. I REALLY know)-
People become homeless for a multitude of reasons. Not just ONE, and NOT always because they would rather be homeless than spend their drug / alcohol money on RENT. And ghetto dwelling is extremely complex. But ultimately, a subversive lifestyle. Most people do not wake up one morning and think to themselve, "Yep! Looks like a great day to become homeless!" Homelessness happens to many different kinds of people from many situations for many different reasons.

And none of the reasons are good enough to remain homeless.

I live in the midst of an urban renewal project in the middle of downtown Houston. The area of focus is the demolition and reconstruction of 80 blocks of homes built in the early 1800's in an area that has always been predominantly an AA ghetto (populated by freed slaves), although the primary landholder / landlord was originally Greek. Much history in this 'hood. (For further information, please see "Freedmen's Town, Houston, Texas")

Due to the surprisingly large population of homeless people in this area- I have first hand knowledge of the personal circumstances of the homeless in Houston, Texas. I TALK to them. Some I even consider FRIENDS.

Unfortunate persons who BECOME homeless should not be generalized about. Homeless people aren't always just underachievers. They are also single mothers and their children who haven't yet learned what their resources might be; people whose mental stability is not considered normal, either from disorder or injury; and people who have just fallen on hard times.

And sometime people would ather do ANYTHIG but WORK

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on December 13, 2006
America used to be known as the land of plenty..I have never seen a ghetto here in Croatia...there are none! Why? because no one allows it.People care..alas THAT cannot be said for many countries..
My heart goes out to all those abandoned by life and the SYSTEM!

Poignant poem..
I'm saving this one..
Thankyou Sage..your srites always stir my Being.

Vesna

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 13, 2006
i cried-some of it is all to true for all too many

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on December 13, 2006
This is a superb piece Sage, despite the debate below(which I think detracts from this fine piece), what kind of reality it represents is irrelavent. It presents a starkly compelling and grim picture brilliantly whatever the reality, superbly inspired and concieved, and ultimately delivered in a unique and enjoyable style.

Blessed be
Paul;-)

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on December 13, 2006
Sage~ Regardless of the different takes... this write stands out in expressing, not only a problem with a viscious circle, but the fact that their even is...like the rings in the melted pavement...we know they have all just dispersed somewhere else. Whether this life is chosen or not...and I can't imagine actually believing this is where one wants to be, that in itself is another problem stemmed off of something else...but if it is a life in the ghetto, because they can't get out, someone can do something...but who? That's the real issue! I have seen it far too many times...beautification, they call it...underlying greed and lipid matter...Boy, you got me going...Fantastic blend, your music enhanced it just right...I think I will read and play again! Smiles to you!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on December 13, 2006
i agree with Jerry
there are all kinds though
reality....raw
very well done

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 13, 2006
Excellent write....got me moving along with you step by step all the way!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 13, 2006
Hmmm, it is far to easy to get married, nice house, wife, kid, she boots you outa your house= ghetto, i was lucky cos of my bank balance, most are not.... well done Elvisina

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 13, 2006
Naw, Felix, this is NOT how it REALLY is. It is a caricature of the ghetto . . . I'm sorry, but the street people are basically street people because they want it that way for a variety of reasons . . . I have been there, done that, and I know what I am talking about . . . The real culprit here is the disbandment of the family as a unit since Uncle Sam decided husbands were no longer needed and that he could fill that role . . . Welfare has failed miserable . . . I liked you poem Sage, I suppose I just have a different, realistic take on it . . .

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on December 13, 2006
Powerful is right

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 13, 2006
STARK and POWERFUL story of the reality of a way of life that still exists, while we strain to help the starving and suffering in other parts of the world we walk on by and ignore the world of hurt in our own.

Fee


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