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Mother dearest...
...you have no heart,
you never had.
The look in your face I remember
never hold a smile,
you were the angry woman,
always there,
the one that suddenly,
without any warning,
could deliver so much pain
for whatever reasons
to a defenseless child.
I did never loved,
but feared,
the proximity of your hands.
...nobody should curse
the mountain's peak
impossible to conquer,
they are hard
and full of secrets,
cold and quiet;
perhaps, mother
you weren't a good enough
a climber, to conquer
the son that became a man.
You were the angry woman
supposed to be a mother,
but you had no heart,
you never had.
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Regis
Be safe,
Karen
(((Hon))), there is pain between each line; reads like fiction, but is based on reality, isn't it? It seems so...very powerful, shattering write of sadness and yes, even anger. Very strongly penned.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
I was fortunate, my Mom was wonderful. She passed 17 years ago, I miss her, still. :( 59 years old......too young!!!!!
Etal: My Mother 1974 Back East Tow Car Back Leaving She Hugs Me For 1st As Last Time Knowing She Would Never See Me Again...
Neat Heart Breaking Eye Opener Write...
TRASK
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
these dark beings are filled with pain and fear that is often not shared and in their suffering they lash out like a wounded animal..it was nearly 20 yrs after my own mother passed on that I learned her true story, I believe if I'd known I would not have hated her or blamed myself for her lack of motherly love...ok reading this was therapy for me *smiles* a sad tale, far too many have known and you've written it well.
A brave word of introspection.
Dai
I can say I love her as a child who has a mother, yet I have no respect for her, don't trust her, and frankly don't like most of the things she has done in her life. Sad to some who hear me say that but it is the truth. Well, written George and well felt. Lady J
Love and PEace~
So glad to be back! Yeah!
Kimmy~
Thanks,
Dan
Pain and sadness and the page is
Full of emotions Your words captured
a cold hearted mother
I'm hoping and praying that my kids
felt my love ... and not unloved because
They where and still are my life!!
I'm praying that no kids go through
This kind of emotional pain
Reminded me of the movie mommy dearest
You did an excellent job George
Love And Peace to You Always
Your Friend...Morning Star
God forgive me if they felt like you at any time in their lives!!
Tears!!
Love and "motherly" hugs to you!!
Love Tinka
peace
William
I have enjoyed the reading of "Mother Dearest...".
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU