The tone of this lovely piece reminds me of one of my favorite poets, Emily Dickenson and one of my favorite playwrights, Tennessee Williams ("The Glass Menagerie.")
You are such an outstanding poet and it is an honor and a pleasure to read your work.
~Butch Howard
The State of Louisiana harbors a jewel in Houma, at your home, and one day it will be said, "She lived here, and wrote poetry such as one of her finest, "Dust Of Ordinary!" This poem has a special quality that denotes, "Excellent writing," making it one of your all-time best works. I am proud to know you, Poet, and call you friend ! - Bill
This is exceptional to say the very least of it and stunning to say what I felt reading it, I do belive that this is one of your finest to date and well worth saving to read and ponder again and again.
Fee
You are such an outstanding poet and it is an honor and a pleasure to read your work.
~Butch Howard
adored this so real to me piece of work
tragic for the on-looker
playing it safe for the naieve
A melancholy, but lovely poem.
Kathy
Blessings,
Joyce B.
Be safe,
Karen
This is beautifully penned, my new favorite of yours. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Fee
You have penned another,that tugs at the heart,returning to the living is hard work,nice write,one day at a time,
stan