sharing a poem in a form I call tumbling tercets... hope you enjoy
Twilight's Song
twilight lays its gentle hand upon changing skies,
whispers of peaceful stillness cling to crimson
horizons and we listen to this silence, an almost
eerie absence of song... even the off-key chime
of too many sparrows has disappeared
and the quietness sings like a lullaby after
their squawking cacophony... beneath the canopy
of sighing leaves melodies rest, content
in their choir lofts, napping as the sun gathers
day's sheet music, waiting for moon to begin
its own symphony of midnight operas and we have
this moment to breathe, to reflect, to become lost
in the stillness... nature's music, its sweet concertos
of earth slipping into dulcet slumber, minuets of rising
stars and the arias of night sounds rocking us ever
so softly in the cradle of crimson horizons, granting
us day's surrender and the peace that lives
within the silence that is twilight's song
Oh, my goodness, Myrna! First, you win a prize for the longest sentence of poetry I have read. The peace and wonder of this unfolding time of twilight overwhelmed me as I smiled contentedly while I read. Definitely a keeper!
How you condense so much feeling and thought
here, Myrna, is a minor miracle, a great skill indeed...
and nothing suffers in the control of expression,
in fact it gains wonderfully.
I read this last night, saving it for a second look this morning over coffee and a gorgeous sunrise...Twilight's Song is absolutely beautiful, I think it is one of your best.
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
Connie
here, Myrna, is a minor miracle, a great skill indeed...
and nothing suffers in the control of expression,
in fact it gains wonderfully.
John
Cheers moi spp,
Dan
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