Though the ideas in this poem are heartfelt and universal the imagery and rhyme scheme is too sentimental and predictable. The poem reads as the contents of several greeting cards piled on top of one another. Dig deeper. This poem would be much stronger if the emotions and imagery were more original.
Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2002
Every cloud has a silver lining... :)
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Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 10, 2002
This one shows the emotions very well. I am sure spring is close.
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