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Pale Moon Setting
by Ronald W. Hull → (All Poetry by Ronald W. Hull)
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Something sinister to help celebrate the 4th

...and I don't believe in omen bullshit--though it makes great drama.


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I spotted a pale Moon setting,
in the bright Monday morning sky.

I should have taken it as an omen,
but I let the thought pass me by.

Alex was brewing up a storm,
in the warm Caribbean sun.

Not to worry, I thought,
odds are hundred to one.

The devil is in the details,
and not in a clear blue sky.

I went about my business,
you know, working to just get by.

The market was as bright as the morning,
to catch the wave, I bought what I had sold.

By afternoon, the tide had turned,
my fast move was growing old.

The week went unexpected,
the market took a long, slow slide.

And I was down the chute,
taken, once again, for a ride.

By Friday all I had was work,
and Alex, that denied.

Streets turned into lakes,
and my van, no boat to ride.

I stayed home to write this poem,
and wait for a fairer tide.

Until the pale moon rises,
and I am on its right side.

Copyright 2010 © Ronald W. Hull

7/2/10

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 Reviews of "Pale Moon Setting"
Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on July 16, 2010
An artful weaving of verses ~
A very enjoyable read!

Namaste,
Christine

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 9, 2010
I am sure many can relate to and empathize with what you have shared within your verses here, Ron. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 5, 2010
Great poem, Ron! A keeper!

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on July 5, 2010
The market was as bright as the morning,
to catch the wave, I bought what I had sold.

By afternoon, the tide had turned,
my fast move was growing old.

The week went unexpected,
the market took a long, slow slide.

And I was down the chute,
taken, once again, for a ride.

I wish you would leave my 401(k) out of this! Omen my ass.
The fix is in and my boat's still leaking. Patrick

Great poem by the way.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on July 5, 2010
This was very well written,Ronald. Your lyrical flow is wonderful!
Enjoyed your poem.

Anna

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on July 5, 2010
Excellent work, Ronald

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on July 4, 2010
Very nicely written, Ron.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 4, 2010
Ron, Alex with all of its potential grief was no match for that long downward spiral. The omen was not the one in the sky, it was the one in the pages of the WSJ. I am still on the ultra Conservative side. Continue to invest in your poetry creations. They are winners. May peace and love be always with you my friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on July 4, 2010
I didn't buy or sell, just stayed with the flow, but I'm on that long slow slide with you. Aren't we all? Oh, about the poem.... Nicely done. Thanks Dick


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