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Revolving Door
by Ronald W. Hull → (All Poetry by Ronald W. Hull)
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In this world, we are either spiraling up or spiraling down.


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Revolving Door


Through the luck of the draw,
we are not all born the same.
We have different starting points,
when it comes to the game.

Beauty and linage,
counts the most.
Luck trumps hard work,
when joining the host.

Born in a ghetto,
wrong color of skin.
Father is absent,
schools are a sin.

Civil service leads,
to patronage for the King,
rise through the system,
to reach the brass ring.

Join a gang for protection,
wear their symbols well,
try to keep clean,
in a place dirty as hell.

As a favor from your father,
land an influential job,
where you can rub elbows,
with the elite... hobnob.

Get caught in a misdemeanor,
with some of your pals.
Get sent off to be reformed,
by a new set of survivor rules.

Influence begets money,
and money begets power.
Caught up in the process,
greed begins to flower.

No education and experience,
and a record to boot.
A desperate young man,
didn't mean to shoot.

Kingpins play favor,
to the government stooge,
once in their pocket,
they cannot lose.

With time served faithfully,
and a pledge to go straight,
the seasoned, self educated man,
walks freely out the prison gate.

Like father, like son,
the inheritance passes down.
The son has done nothing,
to earn such a crown.

With nowhere to live,
and no job to be found.
Six months of freedom,
comes crashing down.

Finally the pinnacle,
of success is reached,
to be named, the CEO,
the road to riches breached.

Closed off from society,
by fear and distrust,
the only thing left,
is to do what he must.

Success is rewarded,
by a Cabinet post,
sucking tit the hardest,
has led to the most.

Caught in a caper,
as sure as can be,
a hardened criminal,
they threw away the key.

Both have gone through the revolving door,
some to high places, some to the poor.

What can we learn from the revolving door?

I don't know. You're the ones keeping score.

Copyright © Ronald W. Hull

4/30/14

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 Reviews of "Revolving Door"
Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on June 10, 2014
It took me a second read to see how you were tracking the high and low. A very well written and insightful verse. M.True

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on May 28, 2014
It is certainly true that a criminal record for an already unskilled, functionally unemployable person creates a cycle that rarely turns out well. Luck a factor? Maybe. But personal choices still steer the boat, hopefully away from the rocks. Patrick

Reviewed by DM Yates (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2014
Excellent comparison. So well done. It's the unfair keeping score that always gets to me.

Reviewed by Shilo Poet
Reviewed on May 19, 2014
Wow, great poem on the ways of life for the unlucky.

Reviewed by Mary Cochrane
Reviewed on May 10, 2014
Such is life. But one thing I've always believed in is that anybody can make it big only if they hate the vices in their lives with a passion and try buy all means to pull through. A race we all are in but only the determined win. As always you got the Wow factor Ron!
Mary

Reviewed by donna bartley
Reviewed on May 7, 2014
two sides of the same coin, none really better or worse, Nirvana and Samsara are the same, it only depends on your perspective.

Reviewed by Susan Smith
Reviewed on May 6, 2014
Right-o. As one of my friends said, Ron, life is unfair, get a helmet.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 6, 2014
Substance to reflect upon; thank you, Ron. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 5, 2014
Luck trumps hard work - so sadly true, especially these days.

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on May 5, 2014
Absolutely spot on...there are a few lucky ones however that manage to overcome their backgrounds, influence etc, and by sheer determination get to where they wish to be...
It reminded me of Elvis's song, In The Ghetto....
You have to have a very single minded approach to survive...
Very well thought out writing...
Diana...

Reviewed by Isabella Koldras
Reviewed on May 2, 2014
Your well crafted poem, shows all different interpretations
of the "revolving door" metaphor, in the social life setting.
As you pointed out...usually it is about...financial/prison/
wife-husband/moral/greed/violence/HR/ matters...it lulls people
and traps them inside its...caroming...spinning...bruising
...aching...till they get dizzy from the revolving door
motion...and sometimes...just sometimes...start "to think"...
I'd like our society to slum the door of this common
metaphor and give it a new meaning...use it for letting
"new things" into human lives...after all we're ONE society.
Society of human race. And we pay a big money to our leaders
to look after us!!!!!!

Reviewed by steve patterson
Reviewed on May 2, 2014
well friend, i don't keep score, and i figger it's a one-way door. nice write.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on May 2, 2014
Very well penned, Ronald...there's so much to absorb I think I'll read it again...Your lyrical flow is awesome too!

Anna

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on May 2, 2014
Sadly, reality is so.
Living life on the go.
It's not who you know,
it's who you blow.

Michael D.

Reviewed on May 2, 2014
Influence surely does beget money. It's not fair but so it goes. I've known a couple of people who did some prison time but came out to better themselves. It's those who become institutionalized who stay in that revolving door I think to exist with those new "survival skills" they have learned. Sad.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on May 2, 2014
With humor as the antidote, the realities of choice make grim reading for those paying attention. Well versed.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on May 2, 2014
I've learned it's better to stay out of buildings with revolving doors, even those with elevators. Just quietly walk away...and carry a big stick. Life has only a few real choices left.

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on May 2, 2014
reality after reality after reality delicately put in beautiful poetry. we decide what we learn in the revolving door. after all, we are the ones who come out of it.

Reviewed by John Dyhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on May 1, 2014
Hard-hitting but lots of truth in this poem; I aLways read poetry aloud and the rythm in these words made this dash along

Reviewed by J. Roseline
Reviewed on May 1, 2014
A very good take,/ we accept certain realities and make a cake walk.JK

Reviewed by Lakshmi Sharma
Reviewed on May 1, 2014
Thanks for this Ron. You point out nothing but the truth. With very long poems it is difficult to maintain the focus. But what you say is true.

Reviewed by D.T. de Bruijn
Reviewed on May 1, 2014
Very sharp, Ron. It's indeed best not to keep score. One person is as valuable as the other. Thank you for this poem, it made me think. D.T.

Reviewed on May 1, 2014
It's so easy to get in with the wrong crowd as friends, and then you're screwed; but then some are just born with the silver spoons in their mouths, and everything handed to them on silver platters. Life is unfair. However, as Jerry has commented, you can go into the revolving door one way, and then come out as a new person the other way. Life is what we make of it.

Sandie

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on May 1, 2014
Ehhh . . . I did my time, Ron, and although I didn't set the world on fire when I was released, I also didn't go back. Learned a trade, a pretty good trade, kept me in bucks had no inclination to steal.


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