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Jack and Jill (Fractured)
by Ronald W. Hull → (All Poetry by Ronald W. Hull)
Friday, March 22, 2024    Rated "G" by the Author.
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Fractured nursery rhymes was the theme of a recent reading/writing group.


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Jack and Jill (Fractured)



Jack and Jill went up the hill,

to fetch a pail of water.

When they got there,

the well was dry,

unable to get what after.


It began to rain, so Jack kissed Jill.

Happily, they rolled on the wet ground,

doing more than kissing with laughter.


With two buckets full, and bodies, too,

they left the hill with merry chatter.

Jack slipped on the slippery slope,

fell, broke his crown, with Jill tumbling after.


At the bottom, Jill called for help,

with their empty buckets and disaster.

Three months past, and Jack recovered,

while Jill seemed to grow a bit fatter.


Nine months past; Jill could no longer go,

up the hill to fetch a pail of water.

Jack had to do that task twice each day,

only to return to coo at his daughter.


Copyright 2024 © Ronald W. Hull


3/11/24+


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 Reviews of "Jack and Jill (Fractured)"
Reviewed by Betty Jo Tucker
Reviewed on March 23, 2024

I always wondered what happened to Jack and Jill. Thanks, Ron, for letting us know!

Reviewed by Rebecca McKeehan
Reviewed on March 23, 2024
I love it!

Rebecca

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 23, 2024
Enjoyed this familiar tale cast in a new light.

Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on March 22, 2024
That was a playful frolic and the “..empty buckets and disaster,” puts the real in the feel, Ron. I like your lyrical writings. happythankyoumoreplease ~~ djl

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on March 22, 2024
Clever foray into the land of traditional text. Yes, in today's world, such a journey into the 9-month surprise is often with many falls.



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