Katy means this "thingy" in the word "exposé". I agree with her comment. Nice job, Ron. Love and peace to you. Régis. (My name is French and actually has an acute accent in the French spelling.)
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
Ron,
Yes we did song titles and this is an excellent poem I agree with Eileen the Rhyme was perfect in this one.
Peg
Excellent write good analogy with the Dylan...He deserved to be fired! The times has become a joke in my opinion, hopefully they will regain some of their former status!That he got the Esquire post is another story...(Wonderful how you kept the rhyme etc;-)
Some can handle pressure, others can't. He couldn't. Instead of admitting his problems he caused many ripples in the waters. Thus after a bit, just being swallowed whole. There are many sharks in the waters, but it's usually us that bites our ownselves. Good write Ronald. Lisa
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2004
ooooo.. a rolling good expose on this amazing expose (imagine a 'thingy' over the "e" please LOL)... I loved that you
stayed absolutely true to the rhythm and rhyme in this... it fit the subject, for me. Good stuff, Ron.. katy xox. (I'm quite sure
Mr. Dylan will be fine once he reads this gem... and, besides, you were simply demonstrating your story.. very clever, that). smile.
A detailed study of the origins of the New Alienation. The author labels it normative or postmodern ennui and traces its rise to cultural power over the last two centuries.
A detailed study of the origins of the New Alienation. The author labels it normative or postmodern ennui and traces its rise to cultural power over the last two centuries.
Black white (well sort of pinkish) etcetera, Christian Muslim etcetera, Hetero-Homo-Metro Sexual, Physical, Mental, Ow! Includes all human rights violations I could think of.
methinks...as this is a fine fine poem...
thanks so much for the nice note you
left me...floria
~Nikki~
Yes we did song titles and this is an excellent poem I agree with Eileen the Rhyme was perfect in this one.
Peg
Love Tinka
Trixie :)
stayed absolutely true to the rhythm and rhyme in this... it fit the subject, for me. Good stuff, Ron.. katy xox. (I'm quite sure
Mr. Dylan will be fine once he reads this gem... and, besides, you were simply demonstrating your story.. very clever, that). smile.