What do you weep about, my guitar?
Who left his soul behind inside you?
Who’s heart is weeping in unison?
Perhaps, you weep for me…
He found me not and all my days
I spent without him and waited
When flowers bloomed on trees,
When rain did wash my tears away.
When yellow leaves were dying,
When snowflakes my solitude embraced.
Don’t crucify me, torture, lie to me, guitar,
That I was sought and missed
When during sleepless nights in misery’s embrace
I listened to the sweet talk of the stars
That ceased to be a dream and their twinkle
Would beckon me into another world
Where torment I’d forget.
Don’t weep, guitar, I understand
That cup of misery I must drink up
As fate has ruled. The days of life will fade
And I will leave this world
That happiness denied to my tormented soul.
Who would surmise that solitude like noose
Was strangling my heart?
That heart of mine that loved
For good unloved remained?
But I will gain my peace
I knew not under Sun
When I will cross the line
And fade away.
Don’t hurt that soul of mine, guitar,
The taste of love it has forgotten.
Don’t strain your strings
To lift it up to Heaven.
And don’t remind me that the Love
Remained a stranger to my tortured heart,
Remained a dream that never would come true ,
Afraid of fierce passion that was burning
Inside my lonely soul.
Don’t weep, guitar, let me forget
That for this soul which yearned for Love
Yet Love knew not, the life has gone.
Weep, my guitar, cry tears but don’t let
The Love forget that all my life
For Love I always longed,
That this was once the world
That I dwelt in!
A FANTASTIC WORK! WITH A 'MOURNFUL' IMAGERY, THE WRITER TELLS HOW EACH 'STRUM' OF HER GUITAR, WHICH SHE IS PLAYING...TEARS HER APART. A WELL DONE OFFERING. GOD BLESS. THANKS FOR SHARING AND LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
This is beautiful and truly a work of art, as a guitar lover and song banger I am impressed at the depth of passion condensed into these lines...very nicely done indeed Liana...
fee
So heartfelt and very powerful, written with excellence!
an excellent work of beauty up lifting the lonely and the
sad! Thank you so much Liana for sharing and caring!
The guitar is a magnificent instrument. when i was growing up i was lonely, i had an old guitar and it became my best friend. This is a heart-felt poem.
Very nostalgic,
your poems often turn the most terrible pain
into a refuge that is almost sweet.
(I think that beginning of line three should be "whose")
Wonderful poem!!! We have something in common--I am publishing my second book this fall. The first is a memoir of a lost child to DWI vehicular homicide but this next one is something I have always wanted to do--compile my short stories, slices of life and a few poems in a collection. It will be called, "Heartbeats . . .Slices of life". Perhaps when it's out we can do a book swap?
This poem really has meaning for me as you pair your pain with the strains of a guitar. I can recall so many times in my youth when music was the comlement for the passions of my soul. They obviously are for you, too, in this heart-stirring poem.
Liana this is so beautiful so symbolic and real!!
Reminded me of the song Tears on my guitar
Don't weep my guitar poem
Its stunning!!!
Sending you Peace Love and Light.....Morning Star
So pleased to meet you, Liana. You put into words what many feel in their souls, but can't describe. I like your use of the guitar as a vehicle to express sorrow...Lin
in the chords of poetic muse "DON’T WEEP, MY GUITAR" strums the heartbreak of ole...like a beautiful melodic song...begging to be sung
Much Love & Inspirations
Vickie
love, sad, perplexing, evasive, enticing -- missed not when the guitar is strummed no more -- very beautiful poetry Liana -- much love and peace to you my dear friend -- Jon Michael
In the heart of that guitar are all the secrets of the poetess, when she cries the guitar cries, when she ask, the guitar gives a sad tune...like a poem telling of a longing soul that has forgotten the taste of a kiss and the warmth of a hug.
A poem full of humanity that's calling a name that only the author knows.
Exquisite.
The inanimate objects that once consoled us but now are left without a tender touch. Marvelous metaphor which I used today in my poem, and the mountains cried. We were on the same wave length.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Best, Gerry
fee
an excellent work of beauty up lifting the lonely and the
sad! Thank you so much Liana for sharing and caring!
Much Love
Always!!
Connie
take care
milton
your poems often turn the most terrible pain
into a refuge that is almost sweet.
(I think that beginning of line three should be "whose")
Axilea
Best regards,
Micki Peluso
Reminded me of the song Tears on my guitar
Don't weep my guitar poem
Its stunning!!!
Sending you Peace Love and Light.....Morning Star
What do you weep about, my guitar?
Who left his soul behind inside you?
Who’s heart is weeping in unison?
Perhaps, you weep for me…
and the acceptance of the last stanza:
Weep, my guitar, cry tears but don’t let
The Love forget that all my life
For Love I always longed,
That this was once the world
That I dwelt in!
-David
Regis
and how music is healing, the guitar is healing.
Good poem to read aloud under a weeping willow tree while you gently strum a nylon acoustic guitar.
Thank you Liana For this beautiful jewel
Love & peace be with you
William
"What do you weep about, my guitar?
Who left his soul behind inside you?
Who’s heart is weeping in unison?
Perhaps, you weep for me…"
That alone calls for a standing ovation
Much Love & Inspirations
Vickie
of loves dilemma's!
Love,
Eileen
take care
Edwin
Definitely one of your best - so vivid and so beautiful!!
Hugs,
Lance
Carole~
A poem full of humanity that's calling a name that only the author knows.
Exquisite.
Georg
With Love,
Cindy
but so beautifully done. -gene.
Thank you for this.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"