Alive (poem) by Elizabeth A. Price on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 9, 2008

"My vision is farther, farther than I can see," How wonderful these lines are! Just beautiful!

Reviewed on June 8, 2008

It makes me want to read much more of your work and gain understanding of what you are expressing here. I cn feel the life in this poem.

Connie

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Reviewed on May 11, 2008

Very, very nice. Really enjoyed this poem. A beautiful write.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on May 8, 2008

nOT QUITE MANIC BUT NEAR IT. You are just feeling so good today and should enjoy it as it comes. Fighting manic depression isn't fun but can be dealt with very well, but fighting is the key to it. We all need bad days, so the good ones will be better ones and enjoyable.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 3, 2008

Suddenly "on cloud nine" often after having been "down in the depths; you express this very well, Liz. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

Great write, Liz. This one definitely captures the ups of the condition you live with. Filled with positivity! Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on May 1, 2008

Wonderfully penned, it feels great to be alive!

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on April 30, 2008

Very expressive! I love the line:
"My vision is farther, farther than I can see"
and also the jagged edge of the final stanza.

Axilea

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on April 29, 2008

Wonderful writing sweet lady,love this...have a wonderful and safe day...HUgssss

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 29, 2008

Crisp and imaginative write that sparks the readers attention and seems to say..."hey the joy of life is to be found in each breath, grab it"

Fee

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Could just feel the happiness, very well written...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Full of jive... describes it well.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

An energetic write indeed! Powerful write enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Jean Pike

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Not sure what to say about this one, Elizabeth.
I can feel your energy and "aliveness."

Be well and happy, friend.
Jean

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

This is great and fills me ful of life to, wow it is great to be alive, Thank you for sharing Elizabeth.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

I love this - it makes one want to jump up and say "yahoo"!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Gotta love it!! I usually say that at the ennd of whatever dribble I have to say, but in this case it deserves the honor of begining the comments. THIS, "My vision is farther, farther than I can see" is the key to the whole poem . . . Loved it . . .

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 28, 2008

Oh, my - this is powerfully penned - crackling with energy and a bit of danger - hope you're okay -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.