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Valentines
by Elizabeth A. Price → (All Poetry by Elizabeth A. Price)
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Lovely day for love...

 

Valentines
 
 
Valentine ’s Day is so special
But let’s get real
High expectations make it surreal
Couples under stress, out of touch
Give a card, flowers, candy and such
Out to dinner and all the rest of the stuff
But that simple gleam in your eye
That reminds her of why
Her heart fluttered the first time you walked by
Is so…enough…
 

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 Reviews of "Valentines"
Reviewed by Denise Edwards
Reviewed on March 11, 2009
that is soooo true! The real gift is your love from the heart in your chest!

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on March 10, 2009
How did I miss this one? beautiful!

Reviewed on February 20, 2009
Oh Yyyyyes, I Love That Look...the depth of Loves Vision Into the Very Soul.....
Much Love & Hope Your Day Was Beautifullly Special
Vickie

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on February 18, 2009
E x a c t l y !!:) Romantic gestures are all well and good, but
they have been known to backfire. I love the whole flowers&candy&dinner thing [?why I am fatter than I was Feb.13?;), but to hear "I love your face" or "There is nowhere I would rather be" or be brought coffee in bed on a run-of-the-mill day is to me the very essence of romance. Great use of rhyme, by the way. Love the simplicity and conciseness of the piece. Late, but Happy Valentine's Day!! You have been so kind and generous. L o v i n g. Forever, and Then, Pea

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on February 18, 2009
AMEN! There is nothing that says "I love you" more than pure sentiment expressed in a look or a touch.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Jerry Engler
Reviewed on February 18, 2009
That's the way to put it, Liz--ain't no substitution for that gleam. This is a good reminder......Jerry

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
The flowers and candy are nice (especially if it's chocolate, yum), but the true gift is the look in the eyes of the one you love, the way they touch you, hold you, the way their soul can speak to yours...even in silence. A beautiful reminder, Liz. Hugs, Elizabeth

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Good point, couldn't agree more, BUT......I LOVE chocolate, tee hee!! :)

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on February 16, 2009
Excellent poem,take care

Edwin

Reviewed on February 15, 2009
Happy v day Liz, your verse speaks great truths, hugs

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 15, 2009
love...the "Her heart fluttered the first time you walked by" and you are soooo right!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 14, 2009
Liz you nailed this one so right, when love is there...passion flows like sparks of electricity in the air and cards, flowers, candy or dinners out can;t take the place of a hot passionate kiss and roaming fingers on naked skin.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 14, 2009
Oh Yeah! You got that right Liz!
Unique and excellent valentine!;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on February 14, 2009
So true, Liz. My hubby and I don't usually celebrate the holiday. But today, he surprised me with a box of candy. The fact that we usually ignore the day made that box seem extra special. Love and Hugs to you:)
Sheila

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on February 14, 2009
well said!

Reviewed on February 14, 2009
Liz~!

A definitive write about Valetine's Day - outstanding!!


Happy Valentine's Day,

Lance

Reviewed by Helen Downey
Reviewed on February 14, 2009
So true! Everyday should be treated as if were Valentines day...showering our loved ones with kisses and approvals, laughter and memories.

Reviewed by Carin Spirit
Reviewed on February 14, 2009
On the money!!!!

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on February 14, 2009
Yes it is...all we need really is to know they love us...that's all I need...love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on February 14, 2009
It's true! I agree. The Valentine's Day, like any other festive day, is now made commercialized. The true meaning of being in love with one another seem to weigh heavily on the gifts.

Sandie Angel :o)


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