Darkness Entered (poem) by Elizabeth A. Price on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 21, 2009

These are quite some statements, "life spinning in hysterical relief," with lots of meanings both obvious and implicit, well-done description and insight. Hang in there, Liz..........Jerry

Reviewed by Mary Coe

Reviewed on May 14, 2009

God bless you, also! A lovely write.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace

Reviewed on April 17, 2009

Excellent writing sweet lady..sure have missed reading you..I have been so busy with work and illness no time for me these days..stay safe and well...keep smiling OK...Hugsss
Love Always,
Chanti Lace

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on April 5, 2009

A very deep message here, Liz. I'm taken by the weight of the responsibility in the last few lines. Those words remind me of moments in my life when I felt in over my head. Like getting married, buying a house, being in debt.... Since I'm not a mother, I haven't had the awesome responsibility for another human being, other than being there for my hubby. A fascinating poem here.
Sheila

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 28, 2009

I love the way you allow us to see what you see and in so few words you tell your message.

hugs
fee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 27, 2009

There is much depth of meaning behind these verses, Elizabeth. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on March 27, 2009

Elizabeth,
This made me sit up, good poetry does that. Here there's power and depth and Axilea is right, "The norm before the storm" is very meaningful. This is fine writing indeed.
John

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on March 27, 2009

Incredibly powerful. Thank you, J'nia

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on March 27, 2009

The many questions and doubts about life itself, brought out so elogantly through your words...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on March 27, 2009

This is a powerfully written poem. I loved the last three lines.
Cryssa

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 27, 2009

And I, left questioning,
My ability to see you through.

Quite powerful, and quite sad, Elizabeth.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on March 26, 2009

Sounds like a future of suicide by cop. Just be careful you're not standing in between phases. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Axilea MU

Reviewed on March 26, 2009

An intriguing piece, Elizabeth.
I particularly love the line
"The norm before the storm";
it is very meaningful.

Axilea

Reviewed by Jean Pike

Reviewed on March 26, 2009

Oh, wow, Elizabeth. Very, very stirring. Your last line packs quite a punch.